Ohohoho.. So this is the past? Nice.

Please update soon

Pretty good for a first! :D

I don't want to be a downer here, but there were quite a few misspells and such. You might want to go over it again because fanfiction tends to mess up document formatting sometimes. In the end you use Frighten, I think it's supposed to be Frightens or Frightened for all of them. Whichever. I'm pretty sure that would be the proper way...er, unless you're from some other continent and that's how you do it and I'm coming off as a total jerk DX
Um, I really don't do this often. Critique, or offer advice you know? I feel like I'm coming off as cold...I hope not! I see a lot of potential with this, that's why I want to help
And I really do like it! (Just to make that clear)

OMG.

I haven't read a good Shugo Chara fic in AWHILE.

This is like finding brownies and milk on christmas morning.

LOVE IT!

I look forward to the rest! :D

Takara Makoto

WOW. That was really good! Can't wait to read more)

wow! this was shocking! I wonder what will happen next!

Wow... this is amazing so far... :D

Good job for your first SC! fanfic. I swear, most of the other ones are crap. :p

So... Is Amu dead? xD

Please update soon

Interested! Damn to the hell interested! X3

hraw.: