Beelzemon is a mega lillymon is ultimate beelzemon should have wooped her ass, ether that or that lillymon is the strongest ultimate evar

I love it!Update SOON!

LILLYMON! GO FOR BEELZEMON YOU TWIT! ADD MORE TO THIS PLEASE! *turns back to Lillymon to yell at her some more*

um...bandanna is spelled like this. Don't hurt me i just couldnt think of anything else to say! i just notice errors easily.

Guilmon and his beloved Renamon? Now that is funny.

Great chapter. Of course, Mom walked in while I was reading it, saw the language used, and I had a *bit* of explaining to do. I wonder how Darkumon can whip up Digimon whenever he feels like. Oh, and Daemon and Creepymon are the same Digimon. "Their" Japanese name is Demon. Don't suppose it really matters, though. I guess Daemon is the 02 version and Creepymon is the V-Tamer version. (With his hood off.)

It seemed kinda...kawaii in a sense (the kiss). And, it was a nice chapter. Although, I think Lopmon wouldn't really much be talking old English, because I read a book that was set in the Hieian period (in Japanese history), and I dunno if the Old English is umm...the way that they spoke. But, it is similar to the book's language. the bloody child, rukimakino PS -arigatou for reviewing :D

Yea cool story dex keep it up. Also can u plz tell me when ur gonna write a new chapter of maiting season.I am sooo bored in this class.

I finally got a chance to read this.

I like the chapter. Although Mating Season will always be my favorite, I like this a lot too. As I said before, I don't have any problems with Yaoi, Yuri or crossbreeding as long as it makes sense and is tastefully done.

That was awesome. Loved Lopmon/Antiramon's speak. Dub Lopmon speaks very formally, but not like that. In this timeline, is he a still a Deva? And just how did Yasyamon become that strong? Love the interaction with the bad guys. Wonder what Beelzemon's supposed to remember, anyway.

Seeing Ivy kiss Chrysanthemum's really going to mess with Beelzemon's head.

Very nice story. No one is OOC, because all but Beelzebumon are original characters. I like the involvement of rarely used Digimon and how well you've used them. Like how you knew that Rosemon whip controls her enemy. I'm not sure if Zanbamon and his horse are one in the same. His card says he "rides his electic horse" but the picture on the card makes it hard to tell. I can send you a pic of it if you want.

Whoo, cool! Loved that irony. I guess she picked up some of Devimon's Touch of Evil from the Devimon hand in the mixture. And I always thought Rosemon would make a great villain. Don't worry about them being of character, as this is the Tamers world and it's not the same... any of them. They don't have to be like the completely different Digimon by the same names and descriptions in whatever games they're found in.

Yeah, I'd call it and Action/Adventure/Romance. Nice chapter. I like the chemistry between Beelzebumon and Lillymon, very original. I have some guesses as to the identity of the three Digimon but have no clue as to the main one.

BTW, this has nothing to do with this stiry but a couple of people over at Megchan's told me Impmon's 2nd stage baby is called Yaamon. I won't know for sure until Toei updates their site because no cards of the 1st or 2nd stages exist.

That was cool. Loved Devimon's appearance, and can't wait to find out who his masters are, especially the enigmatic third one. Devimon's pretty cocky. He's talking about killing Beelzemon, a Mega, and then Cris, an Ultimate, while he's about average Champion. Much easier said than done. I wonder if Cris could actually go through with killing Beelzemon. She still talks about it, but it's probably the farthest thing from her mind.

GREAT chapter! I wuved it! I wish I could write somewhat like you...Ah well, hopefully you write up the next chapter soon! I wuv this ficcie! _ rukimakino, the writer