. . .sap, sap, sap, sap. I am in love! Truly woman, your Percy is beyond compare. I love this story, I can see it happening, and omg it is wonderful. Wonderful! Melody

It's courious how we torture ourselfs comparing us with the person we most admire, and how often all that torture is only a big ilusion, because nobody is so horrible, even when we think ther's anyone worst than us.

And how tender is the love of a brother. X
Touching scene.

What a great interpretation of the way us humans try to fool ourselves and protect ourselves with our "masks", when the real person is in reality the prescious jewel. Poor Percy,this was sad, but sweet!

Very good portrait of how successful we can be at folling ourselves, and how shattering it can be when our imaginings crumble around us. I liked it !

Phenominal!

This was really well done. As you intended, I thought the story was Bill at first. And then, after Bill showed up, it took me a minute to realize what was going on.

This was a great brother-to-brother, heart-to-heart talk. Wonderfully well done.

This really made me want to cry. It is so intensely written, so well done. I'm so glad that at the end, everything is better not all right yet, but better.

Bautiful sad story and poor Percy. He's ucky to have a brother like Bill, who understands. You've written him so well...I really could emphathise with him. Great job

Aww, this is such a sweet story! Bill is such a great big brother, just when Percy needs it the most. Thanks for writing it!

*hugs Perce* ickle Percikins is so swet! Don't be sad...Charlie and Bill and me loves you too!

Aww, Percy. The problems of being the middle child, and misunderstood. You've managed to make me feel sorry for him here, which is normally quite a task. In canon he's presented as so uptight and obnoxious, but you've managed to see past that and give a reason for his behaviour. Bill is so perfect he's caring and understanding towards his brother that he'd be annoying if he wasn't so great.

Well written, and well done!

ah! PERCY! *laughs giddily
GOOD story! Percy is... one sad character. that I love of course.

Very poignant. Such a different view. I really enjoyed it and I wasn't expecting to. Thanks:)

You have a wonderful way of showing the sides of the Weasley family that we don't usually see. I really liked the relationship between Percy and Bill- Percy has some serious self esteem problems, the poor thing! It's good that *someone* noticed it at last. The beginning was amazing. I was so sure it was Bill!

aww...:sniff Loved it. Really. It shows the side of Perce that no one sees...

Rae chan

I just love Percy...
You write him wonderfully. This is great.