Sweet, nice, what else? I like it)

Fantastic. Loved it! Am so glad you came back to finish this fic. And in such an unexpected way. Great surprises and a wonderful ending. Way to go, Mel! *Applauds Wildly*

This is good... real good! I like where this is heading. Can't wait to see where this leads. By the way your other stories are great! When I started reading fan-fiction I never expected to really love it. You happen to be one of my favorites and you bring the characters to life.

Hi Melanie-Anne,

Oh, I hope you continue your story. It's great. Looking forward to reading more.
M.

So, is this story going to be continuted? Please say yes! I'd really like to know where this is heading!

Eps! I haven't reveiwed this
I completely missed this one beyond the first chapter!
Anyway. keep up the great work, Mel! You're got to find a way to have MP J trap Lyle 7 his dr buddy quite possibly escape to live "happily ever after." You just can't stop here, m'dear!)

Mel, oh hon, this is good. I never knew you continued this story beyond the first chapter. I Love It!

Will send you email privately.)

I like this story will you please continue with it I really want to see what happens

THIS IA A GOOD STORY. WHY HAVEN'T YOU FINISHED IT?

Really cool so far, can't wait for the rest.

hey thats really good please keep going

Ok, i'm enjoying reading your story very much, however, there are a few things I need to point out. It's kind of unrealistic how Jarod wakes up from his coma and is almost instantly fine, he was stabbed, and though he lost his memory for awhile, I think you're forgettting that it takes longer then that to fully recover from a stab wound and a coma, but hey, the masters themselves, Steven Long Mitchell and Craig W. Van Sickle see it fit to have them jump out a two story window in Island of the Haunted, and be perfectly fine, not cut from the glass or anything, so I guess it's ok if you do it). I also noticed how you had Miss Parker "cover" for Jarod when he was asked what his IQ was, as if she had to stop Jarod from telling them his actual IQ, and how she figured out that the doctor had spotted the Pretender gene before Jarod. Miss Parker is an incredibly smart woman, but Jarod is the Centre's prized pretender, trained from a very young age to think in more compledx ways than a normal person, so I don't think he would have needed her to tell him. I did like how you made Lyle eye MP, definetly in character for him, also can't wait to see what her plan is, I really like the character interaction between her and Jarod, too, only you might try making her act a bit more crabby, before her upcoming declaration of love and for Jarod and self-realization change her outlook on life), then it would make more sense to have her being so nice. Well, I loved it despite all of my complaints, and I hope to see the next chapter soon!

I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. If you don't mind a piece of advice- keep the characters in character (MP other than that, I think it's fantastic!

hey ... normally i read only nc-17 and such stuff here but yours has one of the best dialogues, i really like it! P.

Very nice. I can't wait to see where you take this, so keep those chapters coming.