This is an interesting take on the story. I love an outsider's perspective on the start of their relationship. And it's great to see another story on my favorite series!

Keep writing!

Oh poor, poor Jadyn! She'd better stop before she gets involved in something strange... Keep up the good work! :)

This is great! I never read the book, but I am definitely looking forward to hearing more about Jadyn. I really liked her. I wonder what she'll stumble across next? Thanks for this great read!