Though it was long, I loved it either way! There's something about the repeats that makes it what it is. Though Earwen isn't really mentioned extensively, I think you've portrayed her nicely.

Wow . . . cool. Long, yes, but it worked for that poem. The structure wasd also rather unusual, but that too worked well. Moving, and kinda haunting. Loved it.

wow.

This is really beautiful and unique. Thank you.

wow. Lovely.

(I am in awe of anyone who can write poetry at ALL... but this is really quite impressive)

Finarfin's bride is hardly mentioned in the Silmarillion, and I think the personality you attribute to her is quite appropriate. I love the description of Finrod, but found it a little sad that the other brothers were only mentioned at their deaths, and Galadriel not at all.

Over all... beautiful. The beauty of language at its best.

Oh, I like this. It's so sad, and beautiful. Does your name mean black cat in French? Sorry , that's random. This is gorgeous, and I like the structure.