Love it. I don't read this kind of thing normally, but, darn, I'm surprised how much I like it. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, I was sure I submitted one weeks ago, and now I see that I didn't. (Yes. I'm like that a lot)

I love the way you write the characters. Your 'translation' of them... Well. I don't know. It's just awesome. Anyhow, that's all I'm going to write. I'm rambling too much right now.

Awesomely yours,

Silv.

Dystopian future. Wow, I never thought I'd see a good one of these on FFN of all places, let alone a piece so powerful... I love how this stuff really makes you think. Some people forget that you can't trust everyone; it's unfortunate, really.

Okay, I'm sorry, I can't get over how good this is. Darn it, why can't I be this serious? Why is all my stuff so silly? This was SERIOUS BUSINESS and excellent. Man...

Luv,

FD