| Reviews for Welcome Home |
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Celtic8Raven8Mage 11/14/12 . chapter 4i like the 'The King is happy, and the Lady Sarah had made him happy.' part! It's so cute! X3 |
Myra the Dovahkiin 8/20/11 . chapter 4great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
Helena Alexandra 2/3/11 . chapter 4dutifully reviewing, as requested of all readers. hehehe very cute. hmmm. i couldn't find the song quote, may i have a hint? |
delete-the-girl 1/26/11 . chapter 4ROFL I loved this just as much as I loved the other ones before it. You were spot on with Viper, and I couldn't help but laugh and love. Good job, very well written. Can't wait to read more and see more of Viper who we love so much. ;) Cadence |
ChibiSarah9788 1/15/11 . chapter 4please update soon |
notwritten 1/15/11 . chapter 4It was very nice. Keep smiling. :-) |
Pureblood Viper 1/15/11 . chapter 4VIPER! This is the character I've been waiting for! I am the VIPER! Oh and the song would be ... in the owl I send to you. Can't give it away on here now can I? Mwahahaha. Very well written, Bee, and I hope to see more of Viper soon. Love, Ciar |
HelloMissDeath 12/12/10 . chapter 3hehe i like this! |
BuffyMyraRae 12/5/10 . chapter 3fantastic! Please continue! |
Anenihan 12/5/10 . chapter 3Yoooooghurt.. I was thinking of yogurt... nice save LOL. Very nice beginning. Please do continue. meow |
delete-the-girl 12/3/10 . chapter 3As always, LOVED IT! The glitter boy and yoooghurt were my favorite parts of course. I'm falling more and more in love with Lanie. I love how Jareth describes her. "She seems very uh, cheerful" Sarah said, "That's one word to describe her. Another would be annoying" Jareth commented and how she disappeared in a cloud of glitter, also loved. Ugh I just loved everything about this chapter okay. LOL Can't wait till the next update. I look forward to seeing more of Lanie and the next of us to appear. ;) Love you and love your story. |
LittleMargarita 12/3/10 . chapter 3ha ha ha ha ha! Nice save!...I bet Jareth doesn't even know what yogurt is though, and since he was not paying attention to that, he didn't question it...and by the things Sarah heard, she's not leaving. She's there to stay...Nice writing. Very interesting. Love the character Lanie. So far so good, keep up the good work. |
notwritten 12/2/10 . chapter 3Likeable reading. Keep smiling. :-) |
writertron 12/2/10 . chapter 3yooooooooghurt? really sarah? was that your best cover? :D brilliant! this chapter made me chuckle. more? |
ChibiSarah9788 12/2/10 . chapter 3please update soon |