 shad75 2/18/12 . chapter 1Wow, very HOT first half.
And very nicely written second half.
I do need to watch season 2 again because when I first watched it and even the first 12 or so episodes of season 3, although I really liked both Kensi and Deeks, I didn't ship them as a couple. So should rewatch to recall these moments. Like in this episode, I vaguely remember Deeks not liking Kensi touching his gun or something like that but can't remember details. You know how different it is when you watch a show where you are shipping a couple and you watch a show normally! |
 Momsa 3/27/11 . chapter 1Always love your stories, please keep them coming) |
 Loopylou 3/5/11 . chapter 1I really, really enjoyed reading this.) |
 MsDuquesneDelko 2/17/11 . chapter 1wow... wow... i'm speechless.. i miss that kind of hot, intensity and teaser... i love when you do that... leave us all needed and wanting more...(too bad it's not E&C... but coming back to NCIS:LA)... amazing! i really, really wanted a second chapter in this one but with *that* daydreaming really happening)... |
 SarahKathryn 12/5/10 . chapter 1i have to agree with kensi he is really really cute! great story! |
 randomwriting 11/17/10 . chapter 1Another wholly enjoyable fic! But then, coming from you, I knew that would be the case even before I'd read the first line. Must start w/ the summary because it's such a great summarizing line (and believable, too). I'm happy you took the concept of trust that the ep delved into and ran w/ it, much as I'm happy w/ the way you allowed Kensi's imagination to run w/ the steaming thoughts she couldn't hold back. Nicely done!"Whatever this happens to be, that is, because Kensi Blye refuses to admit that what she's doing is fantasizing about a coworker while at work. Or anywhere outside of work either, for that matter. She just refuses. It's not professional. And he's very annoying." Just the thing I'd imagine her thinking.
And this... "Very annoying." So true, but in a good way."She tells herself she's bothered only because her partner wouldn't trust her to have his back in the midst of a firefight.
And then she realizes it truly is a matter of trust…just not in the way she tries so desperately to convince herself.
She trusts him, alright. She might've been wary of him at first, but as her partner, she trusts his judgment. She trusts him.
She wants more than anything for him to trust her too." I love all of this. You get to the heart of it and write in a way that makes it believable for the character. I love the way you are writing these two. I'm impressed w/ your grasp on them and also w/ the way you are taking them slow and building naturally.
Looking forward to more...plus all the other stuff I want!(And sorry for the delay; I've been net-less, but all is back now.) |
 Sprite 11/14/10 . chapter 1 This was great! I loved seeing Kensi's thoughts on Deeks and their relationship...I mean partnership, lol. Well done. |
 JTF2 11/14/10 . chapter 1omg so good! please more! this needs to go somewhere, its killing me) |
 GottaLoveMEgan 11/13/10 . chapter 1Wow this is your second one to go on my favs list. One more and I add you. Awesomeness!-Megs- |
 christiangirliemiranda 11/12/10 . chapter 1Aww such a tease at the beginning! :P love it! |
 gf7 11/12/10 . chapter 1Hot. Perfect. Beautiful.
A lovely little bookend to the ep exploring their partnership.
It's awesome to have someone writing Kensi and Deeks and doing it so wonderfully. Thank you! |
 You-Shattered-My-Soul-Forever 11/12/10 . chapter 1I love it! Any chance you're going to do a sequel? |
 BlueEyes444 11/12/10 . chapter 1I love it. :D |