this is a great fic! is there more? do they go back? how are the others? does Aya-chan get Yoji to stop smoking? update more soon!

That was an awesome fic It would've been cool if you could've delved into Ken's feelings for Ran post kiss, pre rejection, and then again post rejection... but what can I say, I'm a sucker for tortured souls. I really liked the entire mixing of the teams, with Omi and Ken with Schwarz... it was realy creative and worked really well. And I loved how Ken's even more tortured in this fic than he is normally Anyhoo, yeah awesome!

This was an absolutely lovely ending. I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this entire story, and while you did leave a couple of loose ends, most notably Crawfords inability to have a vision, it was still wonderful.

yay! *sniffsniff* xcellent work! truly. and the ending is perfect. and thank you for updating! jeez, and i was quite paranoid for a while that you guys might've dropped this one... _; well, good luck on your future fics. i really enjoyed this one. it's definitely one of the more memorable wk/schwarz fics. group hug, group hug! _

congradulations on completing the fic. it was fantastic. I loved it the whole way through! _ it has been added to my favorite stories list in fact. your form of writing is wonderful and you descriptions of each moment are just perfect for that moment. I really did love it.

Kawaii story. I can't believe I pass this one up. please update this fic. Onegai!*chibi starts beging author*

A... finally the bug is gone. I think this story is kind of interesting. But it's a little rushed. I just don't know why _ but it seemed so rushed all the sudden.:Gasps Is she going to kill them? Or torture Ken or something really really bad? x_x Damn... I hate it when people get tortured. Where's the justice! There's no justice in an assassin's life I guess -_ Anyways nice work and intro. Please keep it up and update soon!

*eye twitches madly* YOU CAN'T STOP HERE!

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please? pretty please?

This story is really good but it NEEDS an ending (a happy ending, please...
Onegai!

Agh! You HAVE to update soon! I totally got caught up in the story now!

hey, what happened? finish it! kenkun...

i like the story thus far!

baibaiyukie

First you make us wait forever..then you end the chapter like this! WHY? Thou art evil! EVIL!

On a much calmer note..this chapter was really good. Sad. But good. Now get with the writing!

I WANT TO KNOW WHAT RAN HAS IN MIND!...He isn't really gone, right_...OOOOHHHHH PLEEEEAAAASEEEEEE...NEXT CHAP NEXT CHAP...OOOONNEEEEGAAAAAIIIII!

Ja *GO GO GO GO
Koji-chan

Mizu: NOOOOO! KEN CAN'T DIE! WHAT ABOUT RAN?

Aoi: Calm down!

Mizu: acts as if she's lost her mind

Aoi: She HAS lost it after she ws born..

Mizu: goes back to normal HEY!

Aoi Anyway, great chapter _ Can't wait for the next...

*begins to twitch* You can't just leave it there! You must update now, I must know what happens. *begins to pace* You can't kill Ken, it's immoral...Ran has too much angst in his life, he doesn't need more, besides, I'll start crying and nobody needs to see that.

*moans* Not another evil Kase! Why, why does every yaoi story I find have evil Kase in it? *sighs* Anyway, otherwise I luv this! Just wish the authors would find another villian...*grins* Liking Schu and Nagikins in Weiss! Ditto with Ommitchi and Kenken in Schawtz! Cool to see them getting along with Farfie and Crawfish! *eyes wide* Amazing! Farfie was a priest? Is his mom Ruth or what? So have Ken get out somehow! Even if he has to teleport out!