AAAAAAAGH It's everything I could ever want in a KKBB fic. Perry is so oblivious, oh my fucking god. And you did Harry's attempted 'wooing' perfectly.

I love this! I hate it when people make Perry a bigger dick then what he is, but you didn;t do that. I think you did an excellent job of keeping them very in character. I can see all of this happening.

Awwww

I loved this fic. I like how you showed the growing attraction Perry had for Harry, and how it always steered clear of being too romantic with the boys just acting like they would. I can really imagine this as an extra scene in the film, your characterization is that spot on :-) Well done and great work.

What good writing! You stayed true to the characters, hurt Harry but didn't turn him into a pansy baby, and wrote Perry in all his Perryness while still showing how much he cares. Props!

YAY! This is so SWEET! Gotta fave' it.

WOW this was very well done to be your first, Congrats!, I really love the whole story (I looooove RDJ)and also Harry. I hope you continue on this fandom.