this is pretty neat!

i like it. cant wait for more :)

I LOVE itt can NOTT wait for MORE

This story / fan fic is really really

Really GOODE :) :D

Hope I gett too read more chapters

And CONTINUE too write your really

GOODE att itt

-rozave

OH MY GOOODD!

I knew it i knew it i knew it!

When sarah was describing this guy at first, i was like i wonder if its cian. this is soo interesting

and i think sarahs dad killed zen.

somethings funny about that man. i think he has a secret but im too scared to find out

and oh my god cian sounds kinda cool but why doesnt he say anything about her leaving? he sounds like he's on her fathers side.

PLZ UPDATE SOON!

I LOVE ITT itt already sounds really

GOODE ppppllleeeAaaasseee CONTINUE CAN NOT

WAIT FOR THAT DATE OC THE NEXF CHAPTER

:) :D hole too read itt soon

-rozave