i want, lorna in real danger! jajaja i really want to read the real feelings of riggs about lossing lorna, or bad injury, i dont now, kidnap, and she is bad bad, injury... you have most imagination.. but i think this is a good way to riggs know about feelings about lorna and vickys, in the past so he will realizes the big love know.

oh sorry about my english, im spanish and im a begginer in english
but i really love your fic.
theres just this one with his couple

...Oh, I can't wait to see how that turns out...and Lorna's taking this all very well, especially about wearing Vicki's wedding dress, I know that would be weird for ME...:P

"Is he fucking CRAZY!" Shouted Leo.

"Yes," replied everyone around him.

...Ha ha, love it.:):P

...Oh man...this is seriously funny!:):P

Oh God...this is hilarious so far...Riggs punching a priest, I can totally see it...:P

Pretty good, though sometimes your characters are a little out of line. I'd also like to know what Lorna's wedding dress is like, maybe describe some things a bit? Oh, kids names? I mean, normally, to be baptised the preachers gotta say the kids name.

hhahahaahahahaha. update soon!

cool, MORE LORNA AND RIGGS STORIES!

I think this is a really good first start. I'll read the rest later.

great story
just so ya know, Catholicism has priests, not preachers, and Protestants don't have baptisms or mass

Hi.

Being Catholic, I found this slightly disturbing, but also unbelieveably funny!

keep up the good work.

Catherine

I almost fell out of my chair. It's just like it would happen in one of the moives...good job! :)

How the heck can Leo be the best man after Riggs and Roger have been partners for so long? Other than that it is pretty cool.

that's a helluva lot of cussing there. You might want to take it easy

I thought that the way you describeds the charactors and everything matched the acual people in the movie. I have just one question, why wasn't roger riggs best man? their partners and best friends. Send me back the rest of the story and the answer! Kelly