Reviews for Diving
Aaron Leach 4/14/12 . chapter 16
Awesome chapter.
sdphantom10 4/14/12 . chapter 16
That last line: Cherry on top of the best cake you'll ever eat/
Chooocolate 4/14/12 . chapter 16
interesting to see a colder harry come into effect with pansy.
Baal Davar 4/14/12 . chapter 16
Well hallo again.

I've missed you, but credit where credit is due so; nice comeback.

Still one of my favorite Harry/Fleur stories on the site, even if, being honest, i had almost forgotten about it... but that is just my flaws.

Anyway, welcome back, and i will be eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

BD
fuuinkami 4/13/12 . chapter 16
liked the chapter.

looking forward to the next one.
kyjori 4/13/12 . chapter 16
awesome ending! )
NaruAndHarrHaremFan 4/13/12 . chapter 16
So good
ILikeComps 4/13/12 . chapter 16
Quite enjoyable to read the conversation between Harry and Fleur. Dobby is always fun to read about. Thanks for sharing!
chelseyb1010 4/13/12 . chapter 16
So lovely to see this update! I knew you had it in you.

Their banter continues smoothly as always. A very interesting, mature reflection on Harry about the Dursleys, & that bit about his mother's blood was a nice touch.

Only one small tiny error here - you started out in present tense & switched to past about halfway through.

Hope this all makes sense as it's rather late here. Look for an update from me tomorrow.

Cheers, mate!

Chelsey
Just a thing 4/13/12 . chapter 1
You might get more readers if your summary was actually a summary. :D
griffin blackwood 4/13/12 . chapter 16
omg that was so sweet. happy friday the 13th!
kyjori 4/13/12 . chapter 15
This story is so damn charming! I love your dialogue between characters. Harry should have been like this! Not the spineless twit he is in cannon.

Simply brilliant!
kyjori 4/13/12 . chapter 4
wow this writing is quite refreshing. the dialogue is very fun to read and clever! I hope you finish this story
sdphantom10 4/10/12 . chapter 1
Yes it really is a shame we don't see either of the champions much after GoF...
Man of Kent - Railwayman 3/21/12 . chapter 15
Really Good. Please update!
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