Sounds really good so far can't wait for aerrow x cyclonis

Shakespeare Macbeth isn't it?

This is going somewere hope you update soon.

wow ur writing SH stories again... Awesome couple of chapters and looks like an amazing story line... Hope u find the time 2 update :)

Really good and you have a nice style of writing. I look forward to reading more.

Wow. This is...awesome. :D

Sick, twisted and darkly-well written.

The second I saw Lady M's lines from her soliloquy I immediately yelled "MACBETH!" Of all the Shakespearean plays I've read, I've always thought Macbeth went wonderfully with Storm Hawks.

And of course Cyclonis and Lady M seem to have plenty in common.

GoodSo far , keep writing

Yayz! I's be smarterer. :P

The plot just keeps thickening! Amazing how you've managed to have so much happen in a short span of text without it seeming cluttered or rushed. Hats off to you! *consequently takes an imaginary hat off*

And I loved the Macbeth allusion - great contrast between Lady Macbeth fearing her imaginings of blood, whereas Cyclonis revels in them. It's very deep, yes it is. *nods seriously*

Anyway, adoring this so far, and I swear I did a weird little happy dance when I saw you had updated. Looking forward to more, if it isn't too much to ask. :)

-pixie.

My, my, my,

I did not know I had that affect on you. Things shall be getting interesting indeed. The madness is coming.

Interesting start. Like to see where this is going. Update soon.

:D You're back! I don't care if you don't end up finishing it, it's great to have some writing from you again. (Well, I do care, because this looks very promising indeed, but you know what I mean.)

And I can say with certainty and without having to look it up that the words are from the Shakespearean play Macbeth, spoken by Lady Macbeth. I recently finished the Shakespeare unit of my English class, and did the majority of the reading of her part (everyone was assigned roles, and I managed to get the biggest female role. Yay me.)

Anyway, this seems a very interesting concept, and I'm intrigued as to how the Aerrow/Cyclonis will come about. Hoping to hear more of this soon!

-pixie.