Nice piece & yes, very angst-y. Haha. Hopefully you'll add just one more piece to this story to give a slightly more secure hope to the couples future chances together, plus Lindsay groveling can sometimes be killer good. :) Nice job! Hope you'll do more.

Oh man.. i was sooooo expecting this fiction to happen.. loved it.. the last story ended so bad.. these 2 need to sit talk.. have some sex and be together..lol..

hope you write more soon.. thanks