Wow. I love the emotions here, and it was so touching. Very realistic and extremely well written. Good job!

wow, such a beautiful story

Personally, I thought this was really really amazing. It's a nice frank insight into their relationship and how they had so much potential. It really shows the difference between them and Rufus and Lily. Good job.

this is so amazing! there's something about the way you write that's just so awesome. I love it so much!

and I'm glad DS ended up together :) such a cute ending to such a bittersweet story! great balance of sweetness and sadness ;)

I hope you'll write more! D

what a bittersweet story...

DS did end up together right? thanks!