This story touched me towards the end. I nearly cried, due to Dani's death. I'm sure Sarah and Binks were OOC, but it was subtle and I didn't mind. I guess, in this story, Sarah must have done something to redeem herself... perhaps.

Overall, the story was good and an interesting take on what happened after the movie.

-Aria Breuer

Well what an interesting story..

AWWWWWWWWW! I never squeled so much in my life!

awwww thats so sweet and sad at the same time, i'm happy though that Dani can be with Thackery now:D and Sarah, i think that was nice of her:)

awww. so cutie. please make another u want u can message me and we both can come up with more ideas to contine the story.

OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SOOOO DEPRESSING, YET GOOD! I love how Sarah wasn't completely evil and Binx! Great job!

So awesome please continue it actually made me cry so nice :P

Cute story, I liked it. Keep up the great work.

Dani

this was beautiful and I love that Sarah was actually nice to Dani it makes it so much BETTER.

That is sad And romantic

You should have a second chapter of Sarah telling Max and Allison about what happened with Dani

aww though its sad to see Dani die, Im actually glad that Sarah was the one to help help in the end as will as Binx

I like it a lot. Binx seems a little OOC though, he wanted her to live.

You put "thee eyes" it should be "thine eyes"

Sara was a little OOC as well, but nice. Don't take these critiques the wrong way, I really liked t, these are things to consider, thogh. Or completely ignore me, which is also an option.

Aww, that was sweet. Yes, she went suicide, but I can't even think of how mad Max will be once he finds out she killed herself. I guess Sarah was a bit of help of making her decision since Dani couldn't take much more life without Thackery. Overall, I loved it!

Its so sweet and touching. I just love how you put my favorite hocus pocus character in it.

Keep writing more like this, please. And please include Sarah.

Its really nice. Good job ;-)