|Reviews for Breakfast In Bed|
| awceagle 1/15/13 . chapter 11
I liked you story. Though it is my opinion, that you could have added more tension by adding a third wheel, by introducing Greg and hint at his perverse a little more. One of the ways is to subtly imply Greg clinging onto Ami a little too much, and have some sob story to gain Ami's sympathy and her friendship but nothing more. Another way is that you have Greg a little jealous of Ami and Zach's blossoming relationship, going as far doing something underhanded, such as teaming up with Sorsha.
Anyway, I like this story in that it was full of fluff and a happy ending between the Senshi and their male counterparts.
| xMusicxHobox 4/13/12 . chapter 11
AWESOME story! :) i am very impressed :)
| 15385bic 9/17/09 . chapter 11
really enjoyed reading this _ - thanks
| MissGriffin 8/25/09 . chapter 11
Very sweet story. It has a lot of typos in it, though. You can tell it's one of your earlier works. I'm glad you've improved since then. I love your RK stories. )
| fantasy77 3/27/09 . chapter 11
This was a really really sweet story. It was nicely paced and I loved how you wrote Ami and Zach and all the other characters. I would really loved to have seen Mrs. Keys reaction to her nephew if you know what I mean.
The description was colourful and I could easily see it all playing in my head. When Greg had Ami I was so scared for her, the emotion you wrote was really well done.
This is one of the best stories I've read in a really really long time, so thank you very much for the great read.
| Miss DnG 6/1/07 . chapter 10
Wow this is so so so cute! I love it! Great job xD
| avery18 1/29/07 . chapter 11
I liked the story a lot. I'm always a huge sucker for Zoicite/Ami . Grats on getting a beta! They make writing so much easier and really help out when you need the most. (Like saying junk like "wtf mate?" or "zomg no wai!")
| Guest 10/15/06 . chapter 11
i loved your story! and it was DEFFINATLY NOT too mussy,; it was perfect. cudos!
| asga 5/14/05 . chapter 11
love itami/zoi are the best
| scorpion's lady 2/7/05 . chapter 11
i know this is years old, but i still wanted to send a quick review saying it was wonderful!
| Tigerrelly 11/9/04 . chapter 11
I absolutely loved it! It was like I was reading some mystery/romance novel! Well, I guess I was, but I mean more something like Mary Higgins Clark maybe... I don't know.. anywho, it was awesome! Not that that's any surprise or anything. hehe. Will you be continuing it with the other girls at all?
| Shy Girl1988 10/22/04 . chapter 11
That was an adorable story. So very very cute. i really enjoyed it.
| whitney5678 7/17/04 . chapter 11
aw! that's so cute! luv it.
| Spike'sPrincess-1685 3/16/04 . chapter 11
I love this story, i wish it didnt have to end!
| Maelgwyn 1/26/04 . chapter 11
MEH! Now I have to alter 'Last thing that made me cry'