yes this is like the best cant wiat till you put some more u sould put carl spackes seth

this is like the best commet the next page cus i saw there is nothing there i love hollyoaks and this plz put more for meeeeeeeee!

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE this is amazing and I really want to know what happens conutinue continue ! :D

How dare you end it there! I read the preview and was like woo! atleat chapter 3 is written and then it wasn't :( this story is amazing! Please continue it and write more, I really want to see what carl does and what's happened in Seth's past.

Great job! (:

xDDx

luv it plz carry on c girl in coz seth desevers some love a nice,pretty,smart and fun girl xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

CONTINUE PLEASE THIS IS BRILLIANT !1

Also instead of having loads of different sections in the chapter because of changing narratives it could bee cool to do a full chapter describing a series of events from Jasons point of view for example and then do the same events from Barts point of view because this would demonstrate that they dont really say what they feel, adding depth to the story :D its just a thought!

I think the story is really good! I like the way your adding phrases from the show, it makes the characters more genuine. I think it would be goo if you added more about how Bart feel ie. loving Jasmine but feeling confused about his feelings now that Jasmine is Jason. Last weeks Hollyoaks (6-10 June)would be a great basis for the story and you could add what happens after which ever way you like! Jas and Bart could get together, Bart could go back to bullying Jas and pretending he loves Sinead or it could turn into a more Sarah Craig John Paul like love triangle! Keep up the good work, hope this was of use to you!

please continue this story

PLEEEEEEASE continue! :)

CONTINUE STORY!

Please continue with this story, it was getting really good. Other than yours there are like no fanfics on Seth:( he's my favourite character so please continue :)x

I think the whole storyline is great. Your ideas are fabulous and I like the way you right

This chapter is really good, could you please write another one i like the way all the adult children get along but i also like it if seth, riley and now jasmine have fights. so please could you write some more stories in hollyoaks the next chapter after why do you hate me? is about Seth costellos past and cant wait to read it

I'm really liking this! I cant find any about seth and he's my favourite in hollyoaks. Please update!