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Reviews for: Portrait of Persistance
catsblood15 11/5/11 . chapter 2
please continue this D8
Typewriter 15 1/13/11 . chapter 1
I love this pairing so muxh! And this story is really exciting! Great work! Please update soon!
InTheShadowOfSignificance 11/23/10 . chapter 2
I really loved this conversation. I read something similar to it in another story, but I can't place it. (Although I believe the rolls were reversed, Seto was at the bottom of the stairs, asking to stay.
In any case I think the plot here has a ton of potential, Pegasus's sort of obsessively artistic side seems to be coming through, and I'd love to see where you take this.(Forgive me for not signing in, I'm feeling lazy at the moment.) _

Please add more at your own leisure.
InTheShadowOfSignificance 11/23/10 . chapter 1
I love the way you write interaction between Pegasus and Seto. Something about it feels so true to their characters. I appreciated the delicate hints at insecurity with regard to Seto's character, especially in the closing scene with the wine.
OhlalA 11/16/10 . chapter 1
I'm excited 2 c what Pegasus has planned
A Thief A Pharaoh A Priest 11/15/10 . chapter 2
Yeah an update. I was too lazy to log in earlier. Good job. keep it up
Hmmmm 11/15/10 . chapter 1
I recall reading this chapter before but there were never updates
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