|Reviews for Masterpiece of Reality|
| KrnYong 5/10/13 . chapter 9
Ugh, I know exactly what Unit 731 is, I researched it before. Disgusting crimes against humanity. Anyways, enough of that.
The arrival of Cobb means that this inception is actually going to happen! I am pleasantly surprised at the Batman projection, it's certainly... Frightening. It's like Batman's more than human to the Joker, which makes a lot of sense. I also like that the Joker is hypersensitive, he's an interesting individual to be sure (but when hasn't he been?)
| KrnYong 5/10/13 . chapter 6
Huh, Joker's projections being black slates was certainly an insightful and novel idea. I was suprised that none of the projections was Batman, considering Batman is the only person he sees as more than a tool. Batman "completes him", after all.
| KrnYong 5/10/13 . chapter 1
Ooohh my gosh this is really interesting! I like itbso far. I noticed a few mistakes here and there concerning missing words but they were very minor. I love your writing style, and your integration of the Batman world into Inception (or is it the other way around?) is absolutely flawless and entertaining to read. Just my observations from reading the first chapter. On to the next!
| fagur fiskur 10/22/12 . chapter 9
This is so very brilliant. Your Joker is amazing, as is his dreamscape. I loved your mention of Goya last chapter (somewhat of an art nerd...) and your descriptions of the Joker's projections do sound a bit like something out of one of his paintings. When the Batman came in during the dream, I let out a noise only dogs can hear. I keep wondering whether the Inception team will figure out anything about Bruce, or whether he'll let something slip or what.
I hope you'll be able to continue this soon! :)
| Saphira5100 10/22/12 . chapter 9
| 3dumplings3 10/4/12 . chapter 9
Interesting story, itneresting premise, interestingly written. can't wanit to see what hahppens next.
| WhispersofNature 8/29/12 . chapter 9
First off, I must say that I am sorry about all of your ailments, and I truly do hope that things get better for you, both physically and mentally (I do hope you are able to find a better roomate, it pains me to hear that yours is abusing you in any way). As a writer myself I understand how hard it is to keep up with writing over extended periods of time and I must say I am glad that you have decided to keep writing this, despite the lack of time available to you.
Along with that, I understand that it is unlikely that a new chapter will be posted for this story anytime soon (judging by the previous timetable of updates) but I truly do hope you don't give up on this story, despite how long it may take.
This story is simply amazing. First of all, just the premise of the story had me interested from the get-go. The idea of going into the Joker's mind is an interesting, albeit scary task. To be honest, I was a bit wary going into this story, seeing as the Joker is a rather complex character that not many people (I assume) could really take on, but I must say that you are doing a fabulous job of writing his character. The way you write his interactions with other characters is spot on, in my humble opinion, and I'm never left thinking 'oh, he would never act that way'. You do an amazing job of portraying his character realistically in the sense of how he would act in these situations.
As for the other characters, namely Arthur and Eames, I think you do an amazing job with them as well. I love both these men, so I am glad you managed to capture the essense of their characters and what makes them, well, them. I also love the way you write the banter between them and how natural it flows. That was always my favorite thing about them, so I'm glad you were able to capture that in your writing. I find myself smiling way too much while reading this story, if not for just the character's themselves. All the other characters are also written very well and add greater depth to the story.
I must say, you have done a fabulous job with this story and I truly do hope you find time to keep writing it. This is an amazing piece of work and now I'm left wanting much, much more.
Once again, I do hope things get better for you, and I also hope that you continue with this story. I shall be waiting if and when the next chapter comes out.
| Scary Vampiress 8/19/12 . chapter 9
I'm ridiculously pleased that you are able to post to this story again, and so sorry to read of your troubles. Real life definitely comes first so I'm glad that it seems to be improving enough for you to continue doing what you enjoy. This chapter was very intriguing and has left me with even more questions! I can't wait for the next!
| WindStar 8/18/12 . chapter 9
This is a fascinating concept. I really enjoyed reading it and I hope to read more! You really did do a great job putting this all together, and everyone is so in character!
Are you going to do a tie in with John Blake and Arthur as well? or Marion Cotillard's character in both movies?
Oh Chris Nolan...using the same cast over and over again has given some very interesting possibilities here.
| Patient131071 8/18/12 . chapter 9
As crossovers go, and fiction in general, I might add, this is incredibly well written and thought out. The concept behind it is extremely interesting and has been written to be plausible as long as one suspends skepticism enough to be able to handle general sci-fi, and you have captured the Inception characters and the Joker very well and accurately. The only one who seems different is Bruce Wayne, but I'm going to put that down to him being more or less entirely out of his depth/comfort zone/area of expertise on this one, since I really can't bring myself to criticise such a good piece of work.
I look forward to your next update, and sincerely hope that life becomes a bit more stable and conducive to writing for you.
| Kaloni 8/18/12 . chapter 9
Another amazing chapter - definitely worth the wait! I really hope you continue this story, as you have a brilliant talent for writing.
On an unrelated note, I also love the line from Sin City :)
| Anon 8/15/12 . chapter 1
Oh my God, I love this, and all your other stories! It would be so awesome to see Jonathan Crane in this.. You about to continue writing anytime soon? :3
| Sulky Shadow 4/16/12 . chapter 8
I love how you've combined the characters into a seemless plot. Everyone is in character and the dreams Joker has fit his character perfectly. Truly phenomenal; well done.
| Shakari 3/4/12 . chapter 8
I've read some of your other work and loved it, so I decided to check this out and I wasn't disappointed. You are amazing, I adore your stories(though, admittedly besides this I've only read the Wayne/Crane series you have and The Horrible Sickness). I don't know what's going on with your real life, but I hope that it'll calm down enough for you to post more soon.
| Meralie 9/25/11 . chapter 8
this is one of my favourite stories
I usually only lurk around livejournal for Inception stuff
but this is so good
I'm really excited to see how this turns out, because it's so different and awesome and it's my favourite. NEVER ABANDON IT IT'S GO TOO MUCH POTENTIAL