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Shakugan no Shana 12/19/10 . chapter 4hahahaha the idea of this story made me giggle XD It is quite original that the tenth generation would be turned into kids and the first Vongola generation will thing them their children hahaha But really great idea, and I like your writing style Great story, I'm looking forward to seeing more of it in the future Shana |
KarinMaaka07 12/17/10 . chapter 4Your story is just amazing / w / Please write more C: I'll be looking forward for the following chapters *squeal* |
kimmay94 12/16/10 . chapter 4HAhaha this chapter is GREAT! please continue soon I would like to know whats going to happen next! |
Sky's Eternity 12/16/10 . chapter 4I feel sorry for poor, poor G. Then again, I nearly feel sorry for Daemon Spade; the keyword being almost. I honestly can't wait to see Giotto's reaction to Tsuna, I hope it's hilarious :D. Looking forward to the next up-date. -Abyss of Essence. |
Nekokratik 12/15/10 . chapter 4Kyyyaahh! MORE! MORE! XD I cant seem to get enough of this cuteness! KYYYYAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! Upload FAstes u can! PLEASE! XD This is just too cute! |
ezcap1st 12/15/10 . chapter 4I was laughing at the ending here; can't wait to see what's coming next! Epic fight scenes of Hibari & Tsuna? I don't think anyone has offered yet, so do you want me to beta-read your stuff? It's a new experience for me as a beta-reader though, if you don't mind. |
Yumiko-Emiko 12/14/10 . chapter 4-screams- CLIFFHANGER AHHHH WHYYY NOOOOOOOOOO YOU MUST SHOW TSUNA AND HIBARI! that was what my brain was saying at the end of the chapter : how could you -cries- i LOVE HOW GOKUDERA HAS A TRACKING DEVICE -dies laughing- omg LOVE LOVE LOVEEEE your story xD i will anxiously be waiting for your next chapter |
HelenMayson 12/14/10 . chapter 4OMG! It was so great, I was almost crying when I saw the end of the chapter w I love Primo's gardians reaction when they saw Tsuna and the gang fighting. And Spade parental awakening is just hilarious. I can't wait to read more of this fic! that's just awesome. keep up the good work \(o)/ |
Kanojo wa Rinko 12/14/10 . chapter 4Even though it sounded lame to just have the kids just randomly own adults and just make Primo and the others to meet them coincidentally, I think the story is okay. I think it'd better if they get found NOT fighting adults. Then they would get underestimated. That's just me. Good luck. I had writer's block, can't continue the chapter. So I'm somewhat doomed. Really. Hajimeru Rinko |
Ayumu smile 12/14/10 . chapter 4ha ha! I love this stories. Um, i hope you could make tsuna's group to pretend to be the first and his guardians children! That would be so fun! |
ThreeWayDart 12/14/10 . chapter 4love it! Absolutely LOVE this mad conjunction of a fic! Update moarrrr! I must see how Giotto reacts! |
BlackIrisRose 12/14/10 . chapter 4This is a good story can't wait for the next chapter. |
orangesky3 12/14/10 . chapter 4I just found another fic to add to my, um, 240 something list of "Stalked Stories" desu! XD I think it would be funny if Spade greeted his "children" and then Mukuro and Chrome decided to play along with it and greet DS as well. But before that, a Tsuna and Hibari fighting scene is a must. (not fighting with each other, though. Just to make it clear...just in case...:3) LOLOLOL ME WANTS TO SEE ALAUDE'S FACE WHEN HE SEES KYOUYA LOLOLOL. 8DDDD See you next chapter, and ganbatte kudasai:) |
Enviravace 12/13/10 . chapter 4WAHHHH... this is so cute and amazing please update asap QAQ |
Princess Arcs Di Cielo 12/13/10 . chapter 4wah,can't believe they shrunk,but i already seen gokudera shrunk,maybe tsuna is going 2 be cute,i can't wait 4 the next chapter_gud luck updating and nice 2 met u |