Great story please finish it

Thankyou for updating. It's still a good story. Don't know why you think this chapter is boring. Looking forward to the rest.

I like the idea of doing the torture from a guard's point of view, instead of Millicent or Oscar, its really inventive. The torture Flopsy must have inflicted is beyong imaginable - literally!

WOW! Talk about a cliffy! Brilliant writing as usual!

Oscar never loses it, and would never hit a girl! You can almost feel the incredibley strong emotions youv'e created! The way you make me empathise with both your characters at once, even when they stand on either side of an argument, is truly incredible. You are an amazing writer!

Why doesnt he recognise Kitty? Is she wearing a disguise? Or was she when he first saw her? This story is making me so tense! I love your writing style!

Third person Pov is allowed if you need it. A wise person once told me, you write fanfictions, not for others, but for yourself. What happens, what you write in your story is your own. If people dont like it, they can keep on walking by. This is virtually my motto in life - if you do something for your own pleasure, dont try to make it for other people as well. Go!

When I started the chapter, I thought it was a flashback, and then a few lines in I thought it was after the events of the last chapter, then I thought it was a flashback again, because they were talking about her starting St Hopes, then I realised that it was after the events of the last chapter. Kind of confusing again. I really like the ending, with the 'pigs might fly'. Love M. !

Who was Jesse to her? Why is he being called Alan? Is this baby, Charlie, her child, or her brother, or what? And why won't she say she knows him, when Frank obviously recognises him as well? What dies Feank have to do with it? So many questions, even more than I started the chapter with! A sign of a truly great writer! Loving the Oscar/OC romance going on!

Kind of hard to follow all the names there - slightly confused. Like it though!

:o *gasp* oh oscar, and kittie. That's mean. I want them to get together again. Please update soon. :)

Omg kittie! That's not fair. Please let her and oscar make up, Please!

Wow, you really write loooong chapters. Really enjoying this story. Perfect for a wet Saturday afternoon. Wish someone would give your Oscar a good slap for being such an idiot, but I guess there's been enough slapping already.

Great chapter mate, can't wait for more :)

:) cool! :)