 Jo57Jo 5/29/12 . chapter 37Thank you for a wonderful story. This story line is a difficult one to begin with but you handeled it with grace, tact, and compassion. This is my first review of a story on fanfiction and I have been reading for two years. Your story is the firsst one I felt compelled to send a review on. So many of the stories are poorly written with poor grammer, sentence structure , difficult to follow plots, disjointed sentences, sentence fragments, or bad spelling but your strie was a delight to read, even with the subject matter. |
 Surfchick14 5/29/12 . chapter 37This is a beautiful written story:) |
 kymtwilight 5/29/12 . chapter 37I love this story ... I think you enjoy making us cry... Loved it... The last part had me crying like a baby... Omg thank you for sharing this with us... I'm going to miss this story...( I would love a chapter about Alice and Jasper) hint hint... |
 Crystal923 5/29/12 . chapter 37This story was beautifully written... as a parent, its something that I pray I will never have to face, but I know that so many others have. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. |
 The spicy angel 5/29/12 . chapter 37And just because I don't do this often when I read a new chapter, I cried in the end.
xoxo
Daianne. |
 ana1973 5/29/12 . chapter 37There are no words to say how much your story moved me. You gave me alot to think about as a parent and just as a person. Life is so short. Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful story of a family's love. |
 Kimmie40 5/29/12 . chapter 37Oh Hell Erica...What a great chapter.
So, just to clear up some stuff: E B know that Jasper and Alice maybe angels and the letter, that had to have been written after Riley's death by him right? Do E and B know this or think this?
This was one hell of a story I tell ya that and it was kind of depressing but not in a bad way; just sad. yanks at the heart strings...:) |
 end2097 5/29/12 . chapter 4Omg... So saaaaaaaad! |
 geminimindset 5/29/12 . chapter 37Heartbreaking. Beautiful. Inspiring. |
 chartwilightmom 5/29/12 . chapter 37such a lovely ending, so sweet and sad
but overall just wonderful
you make me hug my kids harder
listen to their stories more intently
thank you for writing this and for sharing
you have a big heart too, thank you for sharing it with us as well :D |
 mommapurvis 5/29/12 . chapter 37I love this story and I love how well it was written. Great job! |
 jaypat 5/29/12 . chapter 37Thank you for a touching beautiful heart breaking story. |
 detroitangel 5/29/12 . chapter 37Such a torturous journey, but I walked each step along with you. Thank you for this touching story. |
 jaypat 5/29/12 . chapter 35That was... I have no words. Just tears. |
 VWatt 5/29/12 . chapter 37An amazing story! Lots of tears, and lots of smiles! Loved it! |