omg i was reading it and it made me cry just by reading the first chapter keep on with this story its great

This is gonna be a tough read...very sad.

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Loving the new story! I have a feling that it will be making me cry...

Very, very sweet. You've made him wiser than his years but he still has the innocence of childhood; he knows why Bella's eyes are sad but not why they're making "googily eyes" at each other. And the statistics line...kinda made me weepy. Very touching start.

Plus, who doesn't love Edward as a Pow-Pow-Power Ranger? I'm totally singing the theme song in my head right now.

I know this story is going to break my heart but I'm already in love with Riley. Excellent job as always.

that was so good!

Omg! This is so good! Looking forward to reading more

Ok - I am a crying mess but it was great. I will look forward to each update but will have my tissues ready!

This is gonna break my heart, yeah? Yeah.

I love the insight of a small child, of one who is still a child but has seen and heard and lived so much. Sometimes it puts things into a greater more real perspective, something we could all use a bit of now and again.

Excellent work, I look forward to more.

Oh jeez...please tell me this has a HEA :( A beautiful, intriguing first chapter bb, but it already has me in tears. Look forward to reading more. I don't think I have ever started a story with only one chapter posted, but the summary and first chapter caught me...hook, line and sinker. Well done. Thanks for sharing what I'm sure will be another fab story. Gwen

:( break my heart little by little.

As much as I hate very sad stories, you've reeled me in and I have to read it.

I've read Edward Cullen: aka The Womanizer and Beautiful Hitchhiker and liked both of them. You have several others that I want to read but when this new story popped up in my email I thought I'd get started reading it from the start.

The first chapter was really good. It will be interesting reading a story from bella's child's pov along with edward's. Looking forward to next week's post.

What a great start to the story! I am hooked already and Riley is so freaking cute!