please update? im having nikita withdrawels, plus i miss jaden, she was one of the most awesome character... until they killed her off in seson 1. :(

please? ?

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i absolutely love this fanfic, bevatte i kinda like jaden and i wish they hadn't killed her off.

anyways, ppplleeeeaaaaassse update? lunch this fanfic! 'sides, please do NOT make this a malex fanfic, he's way too old for her...

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Update?

OMG OMG OMG

THIS STORY IS AMAZING!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D

I'm so sorry I hadn't reviewed until now, I'm catching up on my reading!

I have to say, you've made Jaden quite likable and captured their personalities. All your voices ring true to the show and it it makes it so much easier to read.

Can't wait for next chapter, these two are really great together!

Hey, I read your other Christmas story, so I decided to plug into this one as well. ;)

You're very descriptive and clear, but the repetitive wording gets a bit straining... Alex sighed, Jaden sighed, and the colons are absolutely used correctly, but they're... everywhere. lol. I honestly enjoy the story, I'm not trying to come down on you, but I personally appreciate grammatical corrections myself, so I give them willingly as well.

Also... a person cannot "shutter" unless they're a window. They can shudder, though. :)

Keep up the good work.

Great Chapter C: I'm wishing for a Malex, but let's see what happens. It's sad to say when Thom died on this weeks episode I did a little happy dance :/ it's not that I hated him it's that I hate Thom/Alex together. I'm sad I know. But I can't see what you have in-store fro us next

Pretty cool so far, loved how Nikita made the drop on them, The flashbacks are a bit irritating- you could just tell the story in chronological order, after all the events only take place a few hours apart from each other. After the first scene of them running you had to tell how they got to that point- but then Thoms flashback and then Birkoffs seemed to cut into the flow of the story.

Your characterization is pretty good, hope to see more interaction between Alex/Jaden, I love their verbal sparing. One more comment:

"Birkhoff whistled staring at the screen before him. "You know…it's a shame really. I kinda liked Alex – she had some potential. Jaden…not so much – she was too much of an up-tight, stuck-up bitch."

If I remember Birkhoff thinks Alex is an idiot after that episode where he was teaching the recruits about blue tooth capabilities, but he did try to frame Jaden once too...

Oh and Thom shouting "Silence!" had me cracking up with images of Axmed the Dead terrorist (youtube it).

Thanz for the read, hope you continue!

This was great. I loved the Wilson tribute from la femme nikita as well. Can't wait for the next update!

Believe it or not, I didn't even think about her shooting it. So, I wasn't surprised with the bomb thing, it's very Nikita.

Can't wait for more!

redrose7856

Love this story!

im totally hooked on the plot_ it's a great idea... i love how nikita got away :)i was so sure there was gonna a big gunfight... she is so cool ;)

the way you write the characters is perfect :) Hope you write more... cause its brilliant ;)

Gravity Hater#1

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I'm very intrigued by this. I loved how they were hiding in the trees, simple, yet so clever and unexpected. Adore the total ass-kicking the duo gave the agents. Awesome.

OK, I am sufficiently intrigued. Can we have more, please? Soon? Pretty please?

Great work on this!

Cheers!

redrose7856

Liking it, but please make it a Malex. Michael and Alex and Jaden and Thom would make a good ending :/ lol,. but whatevs. its great, keep up the awesome writing, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Only one chapter in and I'm already addicted. I loved Jaden and Alex working together in One Way, so I do love the premise of your story. And I'm glad Nikita prepared Alex for a way out.

Also, I've really thought where Division is located, but your theory is great. Hope you update soon!