Great story, you should make a sequel set after the series. I personally am a fan of Aisha/Jim fics, and having them in a relationship when Augusta comes for her would be pretty interesting. There are not enough stories from Aisha’s point of view and this one ranks up there with breakaway-republic's work.

Nice chapter, very descriptive.

another great chapter.

Nice… you managed to skim around rating policy quite nicely. Good to see a non-yaoi sex scene out there.

Another great chapter. Again only one thing bothered me, and probably most people wont notice it, but in space it’s impossible for they’re to be a shockwave large enough to shake something as even as large as a terrestrial Cruiser short of a super nova. A shock wave is matter that is forcibly moved by the explosion, and since space has no real large quantities of matter outside of gas clouds it is unlikely that there would be one. But there would be plenty of shrapnel that could cause a ship to shutter.

My only real complaint about this chapter is the fact that an invasion fleet would consist of many more ship classes than just heavy cruisers, light cruisers, freighters. Considering that in OLS we have already seen carriers it is pretty likely that the coalition would have carriers too. Not to mention troop transports and battle ships. If you want more info on this I would be glad to help. Just send me an email or a private Message and I’ll tell you all you need to know. Sorry if this just sounds like pestering, I’m just trying help you make an already great story better.

First my criticism, the C’tarl officer names were not varied enough. They all sounded like variations of each other. Also, while I can see why you used names of large predatory felines for the bases of your military vessels, lets not forget that the C’tarl are from a different world and would most likely have different feline species. They may not have any real feline species since they are themselves feline and would therefore be the peek of the evolutionary chain (even if I don’t believe in evolution myself). On the plus side your writing is excellent, good grammar and spelling. Overall I enjoy you story so far.

This was a quite well done prologue. The feeling that I was reading history text never left me for a moment. This is also my review of ch 1 too.

...Jiudus! I'm gonna cut your fucking heart out with a spoon! *roars with bestial rage*

You fucking suck. See you in Hell, twatshot. Everything in here in consubstantiated fantasy save for mention of the Leyline, the O HH, and Aisha. And in regards to I think Ch6, get dead! Not even a goddamn dog would fuck at 17, dog years or not. You are worse than disgusting and idiotic. You're a Terran wretch. I hope Shaitan torments you in every way known to the Universe. GAH! And also, if you can in fact PROVE to me that this shit really happened, I'll both be astounded AND take back everything I've said. Til then, Dasedahnya, Terran scum!

...Now I'm PISSED. *A low growl emanates from the depths of his throat.* Such things could never be. And now, nor shall you. You disgust me, Terran. How you could play such assumptions is beyond even me, but mark my words. Your folly will nay be forgotten.

Ok, now you're just making shit up... *Moderately annoyed...*

Well well! You've managed to capture our fighting spirit nigh-completely! I do believe a reward is in order. Here. *Tosses you a cookie.* Might I also add that while this whole scenario is possibly fictional, it's a really suspensed read! K33p 17 up! :D

Oh my God. The historical discrepancies are inumerable! You never thought long on Aisha's past, did you? Try again, Terran dingus. DX

pretty good story. Nice look into Aisha's life. You might consider updating it though. You're newer stories are better written and it shows. Still a very good story.