Uh hi.

just wanted to say that you made a bunch of spelling and grammar mistakes and that made it difficult to read, but other than that it seems to be good but its hard to tell because of all the grammar mistakes.

also

REIIIIIIIICHI-SAAAAAN. Ehem. The maid cafe seems to be the place for the clumsy heroine to me anyways

Im rooting for Aizawa-san Ko-chan and Tama-chan

Hmm good start **

TAMAAAAAO or Kouichi

... maby a love polygon with Tsukoshi?...it is a fanfic...

plz inculde Himuro-chi and the secret characters XD

I would love you lots

She seems lollita? so Cafe and idk what club...

I wasn't very helpful but the length isn't lengthy but few spelling mistakes

OHAI 8D

Story repeated twice, don't know if you know so just in case. Cute story we have here. (Kouichi/Tamao vote right here!)