| Reviews for She's Come Undone |
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sapphireswimming 10/25/12 . chapter 1Ouch. It's sad to see such a clever and manipulative and strong character like Azula cracked and broken and shattered until she's become something like this. Lost. Mad. Scared. A child. |
BiblioMatsuri 9/22/12 . chapter 1Pitiful. Most wouldn't even give that much. |
Rowan Rose 8/25/11 . chapter 1love the story! mental breakdown azula is my favrite! this was great! *ads to favs* |
Sepsis 3/1/11 . chapter 1Zuko still cares much for her, I loved that.x3 |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 2/19/11 . chapter 1AW! Poor Zuko and Azula! Man, the whole Lu Ten part, the dolls, the singing... She's really lost it, hasn't she? Rock on! This is GORGEOUS! Rock on! |
FairladyZ2005 2/12/11 . chapter 1You definately have a talent for the creepy and harrowing. I love how Zuko still is trying to care for her, but she's just gone isn't she? It's so sad. Mistaking her brother for Lu Ten, I so did not see that coming. The last mental picture of Zuko holding his broken sister is heartbreaking. I am really loving your fics. |
soyabeanoh 12/19/10 . chapter 1Harrowing, but well done. I always overlook the fact that she's gone, you know? most people thing Azula's still lucid. This is a lot darker than the other fanfics about this topic. I really like it. |
ReadR 12/4/10 . chapter 1why do i love this fic? |
himurakenshinfan19 11/29/10 . chapter 1i love this! you have to wonder how zuko really felt about the hole azula situation,and you portrayed it perfectly!:) |
StarMimi 11/28/10 . chapter 1Amazing! |
soupcan 11/27/10 . chapter 1Well, that was cheerful. Not. But it was a rather interesting character study- and I like the way you portray her as regressing to childhood. Crazy, certainly, but I think the childhood is a good portrayal of her after she goes nuts... |
Static Lull 11/19/10 . chapter 1This is really a heartwrenching sort of story - because love her or hate her, no one is gloating over the way Azula ended up. And I love the little peek you give us at that, and the little bit about Zuko talking to her in the way he reserves only for loved ones, just gives us a wonderful insight into his relationship with her. She might have been awful, but she's still his baby sister. The comparison with Lu Ten was unexpected, but not in a negative way. I kind of liked it. This was a lovely read. |
Scarletty 11/18/10 . chapter 1Woah. Is Lu Ten alive? Or does Azula think Zuko is Lu Ten? |