|Reviews for She's Come Undone|
| sapphireswimming 10/25/12 . chapter 1
Ouch. It's sad to see such a clever and manipulative and strong character like Azula cracked and broken and shattered until she's become something like this. Lost. Mad. Scared. A child.
| BiblioMatsuri 9/22/12 . chapter 1
Pitiful. Most wouldn't even give that much.
| Rowan Rose 8/25/11 . chapter 1
love the story! mental breakdown azula is my favrite! this was great!
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| Sepsis 3/1/11 . chapter 1
Zuko still cares much for her, I loved that.x3
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 2/19/11 . chapter 1
AW! Poor Zuko and Azula! Man, the whole Lu Ten part, the dolls, the singing... She's really lost it, hasn't she? Rock on! This is GORGEOUS! Rock on!
| FairladyZ2005 2/12/11 . chapter 1
You definately have a talent for the creepy and harrowing. I love how Zuko still is trying to care for her, but she's just gone isn't she? It's so sad. Mistaking her brother for Lu Ten, I so did not see that coming. The last mental picture of Zuko holding his broken sister is heartbreaking. I am really loving your fics.
| soyabeanoh 12/19/10 . chapter 1
Harrowing, but well done. I always overlook the fact that she's gone, you know? most people thing Azula's still lucid.
This is a lot darker than the other fanfics about this topic. I really like it.
| ReadR 12/4/10 . chapter 1
why do i love this fic?
| himurakenshinfan19 11/29/10 . chapter 1
i love this! you have to wonder how zuko really felt about the hole azula situation,and you portrayed it perfectly!:)
| StarMimi 11/28/10 . chapter 1
| soupcan 11/27/10 . chapter 1
Well, that was cheerful. Not. But it was a rather interesting character study- and I like the way you portray her as regressing to childhood. Crazy, certainly, but I think the childhood is a good portrayal of her after she goes nuts...
| Static Lull 11/19/10 . chapter 1
This is really a heartwrenching sort of story - because love her or hate her, no one is gloating over the way Azula ended up.
And I love the little peek you give us at that, and the little bit about Zuko talking to her in the way he reserves only for loved ones, just gives us a wonderful insight into his relationship with her. She might have been awful, but she's still his baby sister.
The comparison with Lu Ten was unexpected, but not in a negative way. I kind of liked it.
This was a lovely read.
| Scarletty 11/18/10 . chapter 1
Woah. Is Lu Ten alive? Or does Azula think Zuko is Lu Ten?