|Reviews for These Scars|
| Guest 2/27/13 . chapter 1
| Sand n' Sable 1/10/13 . chapter 80
Nice chapter! I was a little surprised that Helen got pregnant but it makes sense. Somehow I knew it was all going to work out but I understand her being scared.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Sand n Sable 12/19/12 . chapter 79
Great! I figured you got inspired by watching the movie the other day! That was cute having her read that book, I wonder what her dad told her? lol.
Excuse me for saying it but I almost lost my lunch when I read he was feeding them horse meat, reminded me of a Mash episode when Col. Potter mentioned about the cook feeding them horse meat. Ugh.
| Sand n' Sable 9/16/12 . chapter 78
Great chapter! MY heart almost stopped as I read about Fred but was relived it was only a slight one. Strange how a person can have a heart attack and not know it.
I hate that about mister Hendrick! Ugh, I only see red at a person like that and it caught me by surprise, we have Hendrick's in the church!
It was also surprising about Helen and her man. You did a good job!
| Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 77
I thought it was all so good! I loved it all!
One little mistake...in the very first sentence, you wrote, 'her was kissing her neck'
Uh, what is going on Carolyn? lol.
I'm glad you explained about C.C.C. and it was so funny about the cat in the beer!
| Sand n' Sable 5/25/12 . chapter 76
It was such a good, cute chapter and I loved reading about the German words.
I feel bad for the other Ed who likes Helen, am I right?
I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Sand n' Sable 5/18/12 . chapter 75
I loved this chapter! It was so good! I like that about Fred working for the fire department and how he blocked the road! Quick question, was it a horse and buggy ambulance like I saw in LH one time? Just wondering.
I LOVED the B'day card, I so laughed!
If Helen wanted the other Ed, why did she say yes to this guy?
| Sand n' Sable 3/11/12 . chapter 74
Nice little chapter...I was a little confused at first on who was attacked but I got it!
Keep it coming!
| Sand n' Sable 3/5/12 . chapter 73
Great chapter! Just great! I only noticed one little mistake, when Helen told Fred that she didn't care if they hear her all the way to China? You had her say my. Doesn't matter, small thing.
I had to read twice about the cheating. Helen wanted Clay because he was so good looking right? Well, good looks are not always what is best.
| Sand n' Sable 1/4/12 . chapter 72
I love it! It was my favorite as of late, I loved the part with Albert, I just had the feeling you would incorporate them in somehow when I saw 'Burr Oak'.
When Shane was two years old and he went under for his tonsils, he was going under and pointed his finger to the nurse like 'Who is she?' It was so cute.
I'm wondering, if Frances kept this to herself, which I don't agree with but it was part of her, how did people find out?
| Sand n' Sable 12/30/11 . chapter 71
Nice little chapter, when will Frances and Fred tell the family?
What will happen with Helen and Clay? Hmmm, questions, questions...write the next chapter!
| Sand n' Sable 12/26/11 . chapter 70
Oh no! Helen had said yes to the wrong man! Ha! that should teach her to daydream too hard and poor Frances...I hope that it's not long until she gets better. Love the story!
| Sand n' Sable 11/29/11 . chapter 69
Very good story! and very good chapter for the season.
| Sand n' Sable 11/9/11 . chapter 68
please keep going! I want to read more! and good for her, it was hard to survive cancer in those days, still is. But harder back then.
| Sand n' Sable 11/5/11 . chapter 67
Good little chapter. You're doing a good job Carolyn.