Wow, very intense!

::is speechless::

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Good shudders. This is a tremendously stunning peice-I can't begin to describe how well you portray things in this. Everything is credible and properly horrifying, and the style is simply unbelievable. I can honestly say that at some point I would like nothing more than to be able to write with your talent... the only possible thing I can find wrong about this fic is that the length makes it hard to read straight through. It might be better to break it up into smaller bits, but... I can see the problem with THAT, too.

Congratulations from the darkest corners of my imagination.