Oh siblings! Can relate - two of them. Well done.

Intriguing...I like so far...reading on

ammmmaaazzzziiinng. now less author notes and more chapters :)

the story itself is good, but as far as your author notes go, you need some practice on updating quickly and getting over writers block...

the story has potential, just like your dramione story so dont waste it! and i have no ideas on that scene sorry

It's intriguing so far, I haven't seen many fanfics about the children. I'm really liking it _ keep it up.

I like your story so far but you might want to get rid of all the author notes or put them at the begining or end of a chapter.

I won't flame, it's not my style. I will try and give advice, so please don't take it the wrong way. Keep updating

Mum, not mom. And and mid story is not good. Still, it's not bad, keep updating

thts good is scorpius going to be there

Interesting start. Keep updating. PS writers block is a pain.)

Very cute

Its just a brush over, not much information and detail. Rose and Hugo are too immature for their ages. Just some helpful hints to writing.

Really good so far, I'm looking forward to more. And thanks for the mention ;)

I love this story!

I like how you've written this, and I cannot wait to see what happens next.