This is really cute! I enjoyed reading it!

That was wonderful from start to finish!

Any chances of a sequel?

very nice ending, really touching story

Wow that was really nice, glad he was ok after the stroke though

awwwww... you did a great job on this chapter and the whole story... love it...

A very sweet ending. I honestly thought JJ would tear Dave a new arse for being so idiotic as to think he could get better all by himself.

Loved it

Dave give in! JJ is going to know your little secret and then she's probably going to kick your arse for trying to recover on your own!

really interesting start, great descriptive passages that don't enlighten us to Rossi's peril until later, love the imagery of JJ's outfit certainly brought a smile to my face

you did a great job on this chapter... love it...

Loved it

you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon please...

memo to Dave...you have a snowflakes chance in hell of JJ leaving without knowing your little secret!

Speaking from first hand experience, I know exactly how Dave feels and the frustration he's feeling. Great job with the descriptions.

That was great