 Sandanio 2/11/12 . chapter 5Curious... |
 blackdisk 1/8/12 . chapter 5very nice story. i eagerly await the completion of it |
 RandomNumbers523156 12/28/11 . chapter 5This is a really interesting story, at first I was afraid that it was going to be like Reign of Fire (one of my least favorite movies) but then I saw that's something different. You used the 'dragon apocalypse' theme in a different way and I think it's better, I believe more informations over the circumstances of the invasion will be revealed later.
You really had me hooked up on this story because you managed to make the Dragonoid so different and yet with things in common, but putting Ruusan as a girl was really unexpected. HTTYD was a story about friendship, and I see that the theme is developing, even if the fact that they destroyed most of the humanity will make things harder in the end, if (insert italics) it's going to follow the movie.
Also, the mechas are a plus, but I'll look forward for future developments, since it's been a while since you updated. Keep going! |
 Athallie 9/17/11 . chapter 5This is amazing. I've read some other fics like this, futuristic with robots and all, but this is the only one that really really captured my attention.
I like the format. It's makes it easier and more pleasing to read. It was also a nice touch to give the Dragonoids a language of their own. It amplifies the differences of Hiccup and Rusaan, which in turn will also amplify the significance of their soon-friendship.
You've incorporated the movie in an entirely different kind of world, which is really amazing. Your prose is very clear and you capture Hiccup's personality very well.
I can't give any comments yet... perhaps after a second reading.
But to sum it all up, this is an amazing and well written story! Please keep it up! Good luck! ) |
 OnixMoon 8/9/11 . chapter 5Sweet. I loved HTYD and I am please to say I am enjoying your version of it quite a lot as well.
I'm ready for more when ever you're ready to send in our way.
Gambate Hang in there! |
 NullChronicler 6/2/11 . chapter 5Nice work, I read HTTYD:2015 before starting on this, and I must say I'm impressed with your work. And I can almost understand the Mando'a words, I wish they'd let Traviss develop it into a full language. Oh well, haar'chak.
Can't wait for the rest of it!-NullChronicler- |
 megazerik 5/3/11 . chapter 5You have to continue writing this story. I can't believe I never thought of this, it's absolutely genius! And I can already see some romance between Ruusaan and Hiccup.) |
 Lord Anubis Judge of the dead 4/12/11 . chapter 5i like this story so far and i hope you continue writing it. however, if you do you will need to go a little further off the movie story line to make it good. this will be challenging for this type of story but i think you can handle it sinse this story is already on that track, so good luck and i hope you update soon. |
 anonymous 3/17/11 . chapter 5 It's been a while since you updated. I hope you update soon! |
 Dac1 2/4/11 . chapter 5 thi... thi... this is the most well-written story i have ever seen. you, my friend, have an incrediblly promising future in book writing... please keep the story. AND WRITE DAMMIT! |
 Bolo Toothless MarkXXXlll 1/27/11 . chapter 3hey you little ...GUNDAM OO RAISER KICKS ALL THEIR ASS INTO WHERE THE SUN SHOULD NEVER BEEN, but the again a Bolo Hector or any Mark XXXlll would make a apply pie out of the all, but the sevenal 1000 ton selfaware robotic tank with a weight of 32,000 year make Unknown though but the Mark XXXll was make 3356 so its a start, a road speed of 105 and a sprint speed of 500 and don't get me started on the weapons not including the 3 200cm Hellbores for Lord, they can fight blood city kill giant ships and win, so i am sure a Bolo would by a mega Over Kill, but the Gundam can dream but i still love OO as well but poor gundam,/ |
 BlackRose108 1/9/11 . chapter 2I'd just like to say I LOVE your writing style, you really have the slightly mecha/heavy duty sci-fi style down pat, and it shows. And personally, I love every second of it.
I love what you did with your Avatar sci-fi fic, and I was super excited when I found that you were doing the same to How To Train Your Dragon, since these are my two favorite fandoms and now I have the best of both worlds.
I love how you kept the characters movie names but made them call signs instead, it very original and you still get the feel that the movie had, and I also just love the whole setting of the story, I can feel the eerie atmosphere as I read and I'm instantly hooked with the characters just like I was in the movie.
And I completely argee with you about something being behind Astrid's cold shoulder, I myself wrote a fic about that particular subject and I'm excited to see how you're going to develop this.
All and all, I'm really revved up for this fic and I'm definately going to continue reading. |
 Eidorian999 1/9/11 . chapter 5D'awww, that is just... so... argh, I can't think of the right words!
I am loving this thus far. I truly hope you continue to update.
What I really admire about this is that you're staying true to the general plotline of the movie, and yet you've managed to put such a unique spin on it that it almost seems to be unconnected!
The tension between Astrid and Alex is marvelously done. You can really feel the anger in their words.
I certainly look forward to seeing the relationship between Alex and Ruusaan develop! I get the feeling things will get VERY interesting later on!-Eidorian999 |
 Xtraitor 1/9/11 . chapter 5This story is amazing! And I'm very glad you decided to continue it. That just made my day! I can't wait till its done. I didn't want to stop reading! |
 anonymous 1/8/11 . chapter 5 This is a pretty interesting story. I hope you update soon! |