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Lee 4/6/11 . chapter 1 Perhaps she lives, but the bullet is lodged next to her spine and she is wheelchair bound? Personally, I'm Juliet/Lassiter all the way, but you can include Shawn in this. Is it weird that I enjoy the show, but Shawn, and Shawn/Juliet, is my least favorite part? Carlton is by far my favorite character. |
Lilith Luciferia 2/22/11 . chapter 1Nicely done on this one. While I am fine with the romantic pairing of Shawn and Juliet, I far more enjoy the simple friendships in the series-the teams of Shawn and Gus, Lassiter and Juliet. The partnership and loyalty between Lassiter and Juliet is great (and Lassiter is my favorite character, so I cannot help but enjoy nearly anything to do with him), and you captured that perfectly in this piece. I imagine since you've never added to this that it will be left as is-and either way that works-but regardless, you did very well on this in all regards. |
psychfan126 1/8/11 . chapter 1 i think she should definately live and u could have lassiter have some feelings for juliet i think that would make a good story and at the end they both like each other |
Razzmatazz Lady 11/27/10 . chapter 1I assume she lives. XD Great job, very emotional. |
TooLazyToLogin 11/25/10 . chapter 1 This is great I think it ended perfectly just leaving the ending up to the reader |
sarah 11/21/10 . chapter 1 yes, please do another chapter! this is a good story so far! |
dare-to-dream22 11/21/10 . chapter 1:)) I love it! There aren't many Lassie/Juliet friendship/partner fics, and honestly I don't read many fo them because I'm a Shules fan. Major fan. But I really like this :D It's kinda nice to read somethign different every once in a while, and this was the perfect ticket! Wonderfully written, very in character, and interesting. Kepp it up! AND YES. SECOND CHAPTER. PREFERABLY SHE LIVES. And I know it would be too much to ask if Shawn made an appearance.. :P This is, after all, supposed to be a Lassie/Juliet fic, huh? hurhur. It's still awesomely great! |
kittt 11/20/10 . chapter 1this is great. i love carlton/juliet friendship stories. you should update! |
Daryl Ann 11/19/10 . chapter 1Second chapter, pretty pleeeease? Glad to see you back again! *I'm clicking on those little alert boxes* :o)DA |
jediyam 11/19/10 . chapter 1second chapter second chapter! |