|Reviews for An act of kindness|
| Miki 4/8/13 . chapter 1
Damon shrugs a lot O-o
| inside my mind1 6/23/12 . chapter 1
this was very cute, loved it. I love the sweet side of Damon.. :)
| my 2 guys 5/21/11 . chapter 1
that was good keep it up
| Rachel 12/13/10 . chapter 1
Awwww, I love this story. It's so sweet. I love Damon like this.
| Dbz VD rox 12/12/10 . chapter 1
This was so sweet! I loved this story! Damon is such a sweetheart with helping Elena. I hope they get their friendship back!:)
| dracosnumber1girl 12/5/10 . chapter 1
Love love love LOVE it!
| Ghostwriter 11/27/10 . chapter 1
I like it. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| 00JLO 11/21/10 . chapter 1
| lillypilly11 11/21/10 . chapter 1
It really bothers me how Elena always misses Damon's best moments on the show - I really wish we got to see a scene like this between them. It's just perfect, seriously.
| Guest 11/21/10 . chapter 1
I miss their friendship I hope they get it back soon
| Ivycat 11/20/10 . chapter 1
Loved this! Very well written and characterized.
| hopelessromantic549 11/20/10 . chapter 1
She looked up and saw how he was holding out his hand for her. She hesitated, looking him in the eye and instantly spotting the sincerity in them. Like some sort of reflex she placed her hand in his and he effortlessly pulled her to her feet.
| XxxmusicluverxxX 11/20/10 . chapter 1
| xLoveRyanx 11/20/10 . chapter 1
This was really sweet! And I too love it when Damon is like this. :D
| bigger infinities 11/20/10 . chapter 1
Aw, I liked it. _ Very very sweet. And jeez, you really got this out quick! That is quite amazing, my friend! Where the heck do you get the time? Or the creative idea for it? I dunno. Only thing I really know is that it's awesome. _
Oh look, your favorite part of my review. So, you had a few mistakes. Remember, I only found them because I was looking. I don't think anyone would have noticed otherwise. So, here we go: 1.) "her parents would pop in her head and for just a second the world would fall apart once again." Ironically, you need a comma. Go figure. 2.) "Her life had been too chaotic and eventful to find the time to." This is just my opinion, but I think you should add "go" to the end of that sentence. Just my opinion, though, so don't freak. 3.) "She had her diary in her bag like always when she came here and in some twisted way she was looking forward to sitting down on the cold ground in the empty cemetery and just write her thoughts and feelings down." Run-on sentence. Jeez, before you were hoarding the little guys, but now it seems as though they've abandoned you! You need more commas! 4.) "...visibly also disturbed by this." It should be "also visibly disturbed by this." 5.) "...but having trouble accepting this fact." It's mostly my opinion, but I think it should be, "but she had trouble accepting this fact." 6.) (last one!) "I'm a complicated personality." It would be I HAVE, not I AM. The, you'd need to fix the sentence under that. Otherwise, you're good, though you might want to try and separate that top paragraph. It's quite long!
But otherwise, it was perfect. I loved it. _ Another amazing job!