A very promising start. You have drawn me into Jack and Yvonne's lives and problems and banter. It will be interesting to watch them become adversaries later on.

Keep writing!

Would you take advice from Jack?

Jack has interesting taste in women.

I meant to review chapter 1, but clearly I forgot
I love the banter in this, it's brilliant ;D 3

Also, my back muscles have decided to die. All of them. Simultaneously. It hurts D: So I'm sat here off school with sticky ibuprofen gel all over my back. Joys
Lucy

The emails are amusing but I like the prose better. Your imagery about Jack and Suzie at the table was brilliant. I'm wondering how Yvonne changed from the nice person you're depicting. Such a shame.

oh god line breaks! please, pretty please? lol

they're adorable.)

i like this... wasn't sure if i would, as i never really liked Yvonne. but i guess we all met her when she was old and bitter, yeah?

i'm glad you decided to give in and write some TW for nanowrimo. good luck with it, hun. *squishes*

Yvonne and Jack as friends, that's a new one. Looking forward to seeing where this will go.

Oooh, interesting. Haven't come across much Jack/Yvonne friendship stuff, so I'm curious to see how this plays out. Good beginning.

Finally a fic with a positive view on Yvonne (love that woman)! Thank you!

Love the emails between her and Jack. An interesting view of their friendship.)