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Reviews For: The Broken Radio

Ice
2002-10-03
ch 1, anon.
abusewicked good characterization and writing... uve done it again. first with sakura (still the best) then fourteen days (r u gonna continue? please?!) and its prequel (also amazing) and now this. i must go and read every single word that you have written now. oo and i gotta say, i love the sark in ur stories. :-D
Rhythm
2002-04-04
ch 1,
abuseSo you didn't fall for that "broken radio" line either, eh? Bet her daddy got her that car.

Well written, a good look at an underrated character. Nicely done.
icyfire
2002-04-01
ch 1,
abuseNow, I didn't feel sorry for Jenny at all during the breakup, but I do like this story. Thanks for explaining the radio! :) And thank you for the great laugh you gave me with the gigolo line.
silverscreen
2002-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThat's some good fiction. I am totally feeling the Jenny love and the Willage hate. Propositioned--muahahaha! I'd pay big money to see the look on Will's face when that happens.
labyrinthine
2002-03-26
ch 1,
abuseHow did I miss this one? This is great rach, a wonderful perspective. So many rich details, a killer ending...just very nice pacing, insightful, I love it. great work as always~
lunarlanding
2002-03-10
ch 1,
abuseYou're a good writer- detail oriented, the words flow together well, lovely.
Kat1
2002-03-10
ch 1,
abuseI will always, always, always love the line, "Hope he gets mistaken for a gigolo and gets propositioned." :) I may have to put that in my sig. This is a fantastic look at an underused character...greatness!
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