you did good kid... you did good.

Oh wow. This was fantastic

Oh, this was so sad and romantic!

Yeah, this is a really short review, but your writing is MAGNIFICENT!

What a brilliant story. Purely heartbreaking! This story was suggested to me, and I am so glad that it was. Excellent job!

this is really cute...i love it and i love your writing. its rather inspireing XD

Argh! It breaks your heart to see her not saying it 'til he's gone! Well written though, deeply investigated thoughts.

Awwwww. This was too...bittersweet? I love how you took a different take on this and now I wish this HAD happened in the movie. Keep writing for you have talent! :)

-MythScavenger

I wished this had happened in the movie! Adorable!

Fell4

AGH! I love it, It's too quteee 3

don't worry, i don't mind and i really liked it -Let God bless u!, Avi .

Out of five 3s; Four!

This was good, and cute... but still sad! I do love your writings though...

this is nice ) )

Miraculous. There was so much emotion in there it made me want to cry! Especially the last few lines where he said he's sorry and that he was the bad guy. It was heartbreaking. :(

In short, I LOVED IT! I especially loved how Roxanne slowly realised he was the man she fell in love with.

That would have been such a good scene to add. Can you say 'deleted scene'? :3

I really enjoyed this story, and I almost wished that there was more to it. But at the same time, this was just long enough, and covered just enough to make it worth every moment twice over. Yes. I read it twice in a row.

The only thing I saw to improve upon was a couple spelling errors, but even those were minor.

Favorite part? "I wish I could be Bernard for you. But I'm the Bad Guy. I don't get the girl." Very well done.