My senses are going to overload! Definitely can't wait what happens next.

Well so far no funny business, but Mr. Nightshade was acting suspicious, when he told the boys they didn't have to hang around the Carnival between their concerts. And what about the broken Merry-go-round? Having just opened it seems strange a ride would be out of order already. I have a sneaking suspicion, it not just to keep the other Impossibles from bordom, having Fluey come in alone for the magic show, but to seperate the dark haired Impossible from his bandmates. I do hope I'm wrong, but the way Danalleah reacted, I am sure there is more to this creepy Magician then meets the eye. Fluey had better watch his step, dealing with Mr. Nightshade. And what about the warning from "Dry throat". I'll bet he is trying to warn Big D about Nightshade. Waiting for the next chapter to find out what will happen will be difficult, but well worth it I'm sure. Till next time...

I find it kinda weird that a magician would have a male assisstant. Anyway, that and Dani's odd behavior are making my senses tingle even more. Can't wait to see what happens next.

As Big D gets more into this strange case of missing people, he has less time for anything or anyone else AND no one, most of all Fluey can understand why all the secrecy. The case is getting out of hand, as far as Fluey's concierned and his attempt to get the Chief to relax by watching a Horror fest on tv, is funny in an ironic sort of way concidering the horror of a nightmare that the Chief had expierenced. Stranger yet is the late night call, who could this informant "Dry Throat" be? It will be very dificult to wait for the next chapter to find out what the voice on the phone ment when he warned the Chief not to believe everything he might hear and that things are not what they seem. As Fluey so aptly put it, "Like Creepsville, man!" I totaly agree And I'll be on pins and needles, waiting to read more of this intrigging story, till next time.

My foreshadowing senses are tingling! Can't wait to see what happens next.

The phone call part was cryptic and creepy. I think that it's either Mr. Nightshade as part of a trap, or someone is genuinely trying to warn Big D about the carnival and missing person cases.

Hopefully Big D can solve the missing person cases and find out if the carnival is involved. It was nice of Fluey to try to help him. I'm looking forward to reading more of the story.

The FBI must be very desperate. And even Big D's job is on the line? Something tells me that the carnival isn't the only thing shady around here. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow Big D has really got his hands full, with this case the FBI and the President assigned him to. I hope he can make some headway with it and solve the mysterious disappearnces, before something like his nightmare happens. With the boys getting ready for their gig at the carnival, after being hired under strange circomstances, everyone had better be on their toes incase this gig is not just the usual concert tour. Fluey's attempts to get Big D to take a break, gave this chapter a humorus tone. It was a fun break from the seriousness of the situation. It's always difficult to wait for the next chapter to find out what will happen. Till next time.

I wonder what's gonna happen in the next chapter.

Mr. Nightshade and the carnival are very suspicious. The missing person cases are probably related to the carnival. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.

Wow this is getting to be quite a mysterious adventure, with Big D getting called to Washington by the FBI, to take on a secret case, that no one else must know about and Fluey getting a call to book the Singing Impossibles, to entertain at the Carnival advertised on that strange flyer. Could Big D's newest assingment and the fortune cookie's prediction be coincedence? And does his nightmare figure in on the disappearences, in the case that he has just been assigned to? I guess I'll be on the edge awaiting the answer to those questions. Till next time.

Big D's nightmare was creepy. This chapter was well written and suspenseful.

That was freaky. Whatever wicked thing is coming, it's gonna spell bad news to everyone.

Cool chapter.