How this o/s doesn't have more reviews is beyond me. Honestly, this was so good. The descriptive imagery of Edward's point of view concerning Bella is just... You can see how much he adores and loves her. His passion, need and yearn for her... And how deep it runs. I say Bella had a good life with a husband that gave her everything. Although she did have a happy life, the ending makes me so sad. Actually, it made me cry. And the fact that she was being strong for Edward to the very last of her breath... Well, I cried harder. It'll be hard for Edward, but I think he'll be okay. He just needs to remember to breath...

These are some parts I loved, hehe"Great, I made her cry . . ." That made me giggle. Oh, silly boy. Of course she was going to say yes."With the sun setting around our meadow and the moon beginning to watch over us in the coming darkness, I caressed every inch of skin Bella allowed me. It seemed like I couldn't get enough of her taste and the thought that I might never satisfy the aching I had for her, had me looking forward to the rest of my life with her." This. Omg, this made me go ded. Enough said..."No matter how much we submitted to each other, and the undeniable instincts to claim the other, there was always that hunger rising again. Newlywed bliss. I'm sure everyone would say, but this felt different. I almost sounded like a vampire with how much I hungered for her." Fuck. Me. This. I know this..."I must smother her with hugs." I absolutely loved this. Esme is so motherly."The flight or the taking Eddie out for a ride?" LOL! Gotta love Emmett and his... inputs. Hehehe."That is why I had stopped by the store on my way home and bought us some wine to relax with some Chinese take out.." I hope it was Panda. You can't ever go wrong with Panda. *grins"I don't remember eating any food." This... made me... blush... heh."You're going to have a baby," Lily responded. A contagious giggle filled the air at the same time several loud gasps erupted throughout the backyard.] Can I just say how freakin' adorable Lily is? And when she says "Surprise!", I died. Gah! Love her.

Thank you writing this and sharing with us.
V xoxo

This one shot made me cry! But it was really good. I wasn't expecting it, wow. Great job)

Awww, this was sad but really pretty. I didn't realize it was AH until they were talking about eating though I'm such a ditz...anyway, I'm a lover of 1 shots that take chances, and you really did just that with this one. I loved it! It was really interesting to see a different take on what could have happened, especially if they were human. Great job!

wow i was not expecting her to die! that was sooo sad! DX but all in all a very good story!

This is an amazing story. I love that Edward and Bella had a beautiful daughter together. I also love that Bella gave him the courage to cary on after she died to take care of their daughter. I found the story very sad as well. Losing anyone is hard, but losing your wife, right after she has given birth must be devistating.

Ah how do you always manage to make me tear up! Ah absolutley amazing as always... well never mind im crying.. . Well cant wait for an update on the stories! :D

Loved it! Poor Edward!

Great story. It made me cried. You did an excellent job writing it. Thank you

very sad.