|Reviews for Proactive|
| MelodyPotterSnape 9/21/12 . chapter 4
I loved how you had Tony stand up for himself. Yeah Tibbs! I laughed myself silly with the last line of Tony asking Gibbs about his opinion of headslaps as a form of punishment
| eng-sana 1/10/11 . chapter 4
I can't say that enough...great story and great writing...I am enjoying your stories so much and glad to have found your account...thank you so much for these wounderful creations.
| Din7 12/16/10 . chapter 4
| H.I. Fanfiction 12/7/10 . chapter 4
Awww... love this story! Please continue... hugs abound... Erynn. :-]
| DS2010 12/7/10 . chapter 4
| SchroedingersKat 12/7/10 . chapter 4
Nice ending! Gibbs moving to Rota to be with Tony was really sweet. Loved it!
| H.I. Fanfiction 12/3/10 . chapter 3
Awww... leave us in the lurch! Please update soon! Great job as far... hugs abound... Erynn. :-]
| DS2010 12/3/10 . chapter 3
This should be good, can't wait for that conversation
| TheNaggingCube 11/28/10 . chapter 2
Very nicely told. I like how you've rolled it all together. Others have done this idea before but I am enjoying yours greatly.
One tiny idea change, this line: My ego could only take so many blows... I don't think Tony the way you write him would be as worried about his ego, perhaps his heart instead?
| MarieP 11/28/10 . chapter 2
Good story so far. I look forward to more
| PuckurtPartieLover 11/23/10 . chapter 1
I liked it. I still think you should make it a two shot and write about Gibbs going to Rota, Spain and getting Tony back.
| Kitty Black Cat 11/22/10 . chapter 1
Just wanted to say that I liked this story a lot. Most stories post-hiatus are from Tony's POV and they are really angsty and their ending is filled with angts; there's no true resolution. Tony is still hurt, he just puts it aside and it both breaks my heart and make me want to kill somebody(figuratively speaking of course). So I was really happy to see that this fic is from Gibbs point of view. I'm not used to reading fics that are at the first person POV but I thought this was well done. As for a resolution, well I'm really, really hoping to see a next chapter or a sequel! 'Cause I really want to know what Tony thinks and what he will do. So yeah, I hope to see more!
| SchroedingersKat 11/22/10 . chapter 1
Cool fic! I like the ones with a little bit of angst and then Gibbs realising that he was being an ass to Tony. Though I have to say that the ending does not read as a one-shot, it sounds as if there should be a continuation about what happens when Gibbs gets to Spain. Just an observation...
| The Original Geek 11/22/10 . chapter 1
Neat story. I don't usually like first-person introspection stories (despite having written a couple of non-fanfic ones myself) but yours is well done - glad I took the chance. I do hope that you'll continue it and show us what happens when Gibbs gets to Rota.
| loveshj 11/22/10 . chapter 1
Okay I know it says complete but there is going to be more right? Its a great story and I would love to see Gibbs grovel in front of Tony.