|Reviews for CollateralRevised Ending|
| James 10/27/12 . chapter 1
Great ending. There was some great dialog between the two.
| Jane 5/30/11 . chapter 1
I like it. Your ending was pretty good, I watch this movie a least every two days. Every single time I watch it, there's something else I figure out. You didn't add too much, so the movie still had that "mysterious cool" it kept throughout.
Only wish somebody could've included; in the movie there's a sign that says Long Beach above Max that Vincent takes one last glance at the sign and than dies. It was suppose to interpret the beginning of the story where Max goes on about his escape in an island picture.
But your story was just right, simple,clean, and a bit of mystery.