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brisha12 12/20/11 . chapter 1
Christina: Yaaayyy! Awesome story!
Yui: Really?

Christina: Yeah! You're my favorite character! I understand how you felt when you became Seiryu no Miko, but Tamahome shouldn't have treated you like that when he found out the truth from you and Nakago talking. Hey, I have a question.
Yui: What is it?
Christina: Do you hate Miaka?
Yui: Yes, I do. You saw what happened to me! She left me there, not answering my cries for help!
Christina: Ok, ok, I was just wondering. Do you hate me?
Yui*smiles* No, I don't. Even if you were the Suzaku no Miko, and Tamahome fell in love with you, and if you came back for both of us, then no.
Christina: Well, one of my friends said she didn't like Miaka, because she's a glutton and the way she trears Tamahome.
Yui: Yeah, I don't think Miaka and Tamahome make a perfect match.
Christina: Well...how about you and Suboshi?

Yui: Hey! Suboshi's not even in here!
Christina: Yeah, but still you two would make a nice couple. Now the question is: would Nakago and I make a cute couple?

Yui: I don't know, but I'm sure you two would be happy.
Christina: I want to be Seiryu no Miko too!
Yui: Hey, if you want, I'll let you. Being a miko tires me out anyway.
Christina: Sure, I'll start it, but which version?
Yui*in thought* hmmm...don't know, but anyway, awesome story, huh?
Christina: Yeah, the way Tamahome was thinking...and how Miaka was described...

Yui: If you become the Seiryu no Miko, I'll help you in your duty. Miaka shouldn't have Tamahome.
Christina: Tasuki and Miaka make a better pair!

Yui: Tasuki..?
Christina: The guy with the spiky orange hair and as I heard from others, he has the mouth of a sailor. And a magical fan that shoots flame! Anyway totally awesome story! Bye, Kaze-chan!
Yui: See ya later! brisha12 and I are going to work on our stort *exits the room
Christina*following suit* can't wait to read more of your stories! You can check it out! Keep writing! Bye!
Rabbit 3/17/02 . chapter 1
Kaze-samaaaaa! My FY mentor! *waves* Just thought I'd give you a little boost: What a yummy fic this is! Evil, evil, kill Miaka *cackle, cackle, hack, cough, sputter* Schweet little thing on Tamahome's change to the "bad guys" side. _ It's very nice not to see him the little annoying Taka he was in the show... *giggles insanely* Well, that's all from your chipper little SLPR! *flops*
roku kyu 3/11/02 . chapter 1
Exxcccellent, Kaze-chan! A very convincing explanation for Tamahome's murderous state of mind when he meets up with Miaka again. As usual, I enjoyed your vivid scenery and emotional characterizations. I especially like the irony of the memory of the Evil Konan Empire, and Tamahome's anticipation of getting his hands on one of the Suzaku seishi. Brrrrrrr! Great job!
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