|Reviews for Cold Hard Evidence|
| suisei no mitsukai 5/20/13 . chapter 11
This is hands down one of the best Sailor Moon/Gundam Wing crossovers I've ever read. I feel like each of the characters gets equal attention and are written well. The story is also very original. Keep up the great work!
| bermellon 5/16/13 . chapter 11
Rei's sixth sense is a fraud, not to inform him about the enemies around or you do again intentions. And I believed that I had precognition
| Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 11
not updating? for shame!
| Sadekuuro 5/1/13 . chapter 11
When I first read this, I was in the computer class in my school... Which turned out to be a bad idea because I had to work really hard to tone down my spazzing. It was especially difficult when I got to the part with Minako, Ami and Wufei, when I wanted to go full-blown fangirl. That scene just made me so happy!
Great work once again, I'll be looking forward to your next update!
| Oombala 4/29/13 . chapter 11
Ahhhh, this was wonderful! I'm enjoying all of this and can't wait to read more, plus the sheer size of the chapter alone was fabulous. I hope to see more of this soon and let me tell you, I love the relationships and how everything is working together! No criticisms, just praise. -A long absent Oombala
| aquafina rain 1/18/13 . chapter 10
ahhh oh my gosh why have i only discovered this now?! i am completely smitten! i love love love how you characterize ami. she's constantly being thrown in the back as the genius, the planner, the plotter etc but i like that you take it a step further. she's quite capable of being a badass (as nicely demonstrated with that fist of ice) as well as the soother. ugh and wufei is just so wufei. i understand how hard it can be to write him, and his confusion/intrigue at ami is done very naturally!
and omg. mako as an underground fighter glkajfjasf i love it! it was an idea i myself have had for awhile so i'm stoked that you managed to do it so well and naturally, with her hiding it from the senshi (of course). i also liked that she was the one pressured to give minako up (bc of course she wouldn't, but the pressure against her is so realistic bc she is so kind and of course people would latch onto that), but i am so sad that quatre is like deceiving her! actually no i love that he's deceiving her. he gets the same treatment that ami does a lot (kind-hearted gentle yadda yadda) and it's great that you pull out his soldier side. of course he's a cunning little thing. i love that side of q hahahaa.
also, heero! ahhhh let me squeal some more! it's so nice to see a fic where he isn't classified as this like... one-dimensional i-will-kill-you kind of guy. there's so many layers to him and i like that you've peeled back a little bit :) although i am wondering at his ulterior motives... which makes me sad bc if there are then poor rei bc she actually has a friend!
speaking of rei, omg i am torn between this newfound friendship with her and heero (omg whatever she totally thinks he's hot she just doesn't know it yet) and a;sljdfa;lksdf she and duo are so cute :( i adore that he's getting along so easily with grandpa hino and that she doesn't put up with his BS but he's worming his way into her life much like the senshi did.
oh man and the way duo is pretending to be some bimbo when he's really slicker than words _ i am in love haha! i feel like he's the only one really making any progress with this investigation. which is great! bc it's duo and everyone underestimates him.
i am dying at haruka speaking italian. ugh i love the outers _
omg anyway i am sorry for this jabber-fest; this review was way too long hahaha! i hope that you're still working on this bc i would be so sad to see it left like this! i really do look forward to more :)
| Pocky of NyaNyaLand 12/23/12 . chapter 10
I really don't know whose ending up with who. Just when I think I have an idea, someone different pops up and bam. I'm so confused. I love this story, though. Thank you for writing.
| Pocky of NyaNyaLand 12/23/12 . chapter 2
Aww...I love Minako/Duo. Oh well, beggers can't be chosers. So they suspect Minako! That's...not good. Don't worry about unrealism. This is fanfiction. Realism is for real people. So some of my favorite parts is:
"Duo," a blond boy scolded. "Try not to be so loud. You're embarrassing me."
"Just being seen with him is embarrassing,"
And I love how you portray everyone's circumstances. It is really nice. Thank you for writing!
| Pocky of NyaNyaLand 12/23/12 . chapter 1
Okay, just read the first chapter and may I say that it is spectacular I love your portrayal of Rei. She's so in character and canon. She is really admired at her school in the series so I like how you show that in your story. Usagi is so cute without being annoying! And let me say that your writing is amongst the best for the GWSM fandom. Really looking forward to reading more! Next chapter!
| leafstone 11/24/12 . chapter 10
great story can't wait for more.
| Crispywheat 11/14/12 . chapter 10
Yay please keep updating this a great story
| HarryPotter and TrowaBarton 10/24/12 . chapter 10
Can't wait to see what the Outers have decided to do! Update, update, update. *Giggles*
| TopazDragon 10/7/12 . chapter 10
Oooh, Duo has found something! Our poor girls might have a bit more trouble now, especially after things had begun quieting down. But now, I'm curious. Quatre mentioned a contract...but by who I wonder?
It's interesting to see the diversity amongst both groups coming together, but also we begin to see the similarities between them. Heero noted that Rei and Minako were like him and the others with their slight penchant for solitude.
I have to admit I thought pairings were defined already, but with each chapter I'm see the many different paths you'll go. I'm interested to see what you will do as I'm sure you have you're own ideas for pairings.
And you're making me fall more in love with Wufei and Ami, especially with the scenes we have seen thus far. And I love how you gave Ami her moment of, well, being a truly enraged woman. I was with Wufei on not apologizing and in Ami's words, he deserved everything he got, the bitch!XD
I'm glad to see you writing and I'm glad to be any help that I can be. I'm hardly on enough to write it seems, so I'm glad amazing authors like you are out there. Keep it up.
| Guest 10/5/12 . chapter 10
I really liked how you wrote Wufei in this chapter. Normally he's not my favorite Gundam character but I felt you wrote him very naturally and realistic without being cheesy with his personality. Keep up the great work.
| Sadekuuro 10/5/12 . chapter 10
Whoa, Ami! I always did think she was capable of extreme anger, it just takes a lot to get her to that point. I suppose if someone's life was on the line, it could very well happen. I really like that she and Wufei are starting to find more respect for each other, too! ...You can probably tell that was my favorite part in the chapter, again. I really like these two...
I also like how you're developing the characters. The idea of Makoto in a fight club fits, and I'm glad she has somewhere to go if need be.
Again, this was a great chapter! I really look forward to more, especially seeing as Duo found the communicator, and the Outers need to give their decision about the plan...