If B did care so much for E then why was she so wrapped up in the contest after the winner announcement?: 'God, could I be any more rude and unfeeling? He just spilled his guts over there for me and I here I was still thinking of the contest.'

What did B mean when she said she'd been felt up by Paul - was she just referring to the signing of her stomach or was there more? If not, then why was Paul so shy and stuff with her?

Thanks Betti. I wish it were longer :)

Hi Betti, I read this ages ago, before you "became" Betti, that is the beautiful and talented lady who created such a beautiful, touching story in Little Green, and now I'm so thrilled to have the opportunity to tell you how much I loved this story, very cutely done, they hate each other, then they are crushing on each other. So sweet, glad you got rid of that odious James. I've always hated Renee, always blamed her for Bella's low self-esteem. I felt if I ever met her, I'd want to punch her in the face for being such a selfish, self-centered always seemed to me that she was competing with her daughter. Grow up woman and take some responsibility, stop expecting your child to be your caretaker. Bella was always much prettier than her mother and I hated that she didn't see that herself. This is sweet and very very nice and I loved the words so much. I would ask you where you found the words, but knowing you and your creative spirit, I have know doubt you composed it yourself. Mwah, Rachel

Loved it!

God that was...that was just so lovely. I'm not surprised it won.

This made me laugh so much. I especially liked the ending.

I love this. I'm going to read more.

Nice job, ladies ! I enjoyed this story.

awwww cuteeee! Who says chiverly is dead?We have our own amazing guy here being all gentleman-y (in the end :P) and taking our breaths away :)

I loved the banter between them but most of all I really liked how they sort of fell in love with each other without knowing how the other one in love with the other's mind is far more difficult and far more meaningful than being physically attracted to them.

And they have both!

very cute story. thank you.

What a fun, cute little story! :)

I loved it thank you

awwww it was such a sweet story and I loved the ending with Bella sitting on the amp xx

ok, loved it, and also loved edwards sneaky move leaving bella on the amp and getting her all hot n turned on...*sigh*...i want an edward like that..

Wow, I loved it. lt was fun, light but full of young hot romance. Are you going to add another chapter or two and turn this into a short story? I liked this as much as I have your other stories. Great o/s but hope for more.