The characters are spot on. The madness and crazy, illogically logical-ness of the Joker, and the annoying, helpless, wants-to-be-tough Rachel. I picture them reacting exactly as depicted. I love both POV's, and how they switch back and forth. And the small things in the middle of a spoken sentence," smile, lick, flick...etc. I want more. Please. :)

Brilliant, as always.

I'm curious what's going to happen next! How will the Joker react to her real identity? I hope that you haven't given up on this!

Please please please make the next chapter I neeeeeeeed it

Holy shit lol it's almost 3 in the morning but I couldnt stop reading. Wow this was good. I would be sooo pleased for another chapter :D this is going to favorites

Yay! Finally got to reading this, and I just loved it. Even in your previous stories you capture the Joker so well, but I love him in this because it is a different character he is interacting with, or rather a new identity of sorts you've created in Rachel's place, and its nice to see the consistency of his personalities for both characters and not JUST for Rachel as an obsessive/romantic-ish interest.

I honestly can't find fault in this story, the only thing I'd say is perhaps to place a break or something when the POV of the Joker and Rachel switches. The first time it happened, I was like "OMG what just happened and why is it basically repeating itself and holy crap and - oooooohhhhhh :) ". But yeah, that would be really appreciated!

And gah, you've left us with so much to look forward to! I know when Rachel sort of trailed off in her sentence I was thinking "Nobody who's ever heard one of your scar stories has survived, and... and what? what!". I can't wait to find out what the Joker is thinking! Please update as soon as you can!

You still amaze me with your skills at writing. Especially the quality concerning the Joker and his behavior. It's thrilling to read; you are able to capture him perfectly. Wonderful chapter!

Oh, wow! That was AMAZING! :-O Totally made up for falling off the face of the earth. haha jk. ;)

Wow the terror you capture with the words is brilliant. You write rachel well when she is trying to seem tough and then the little slip at the end... what's gonna happen with that. Will Joker notice the link or will it slip through the cracks?

Joker was brilliant, he was terrifying and still kept his playfulness. He toyed with rachel keeping her just placed just on the cusp of running for the door and wanting to beat his head in. Which she did beat him up a little bit even though it didn't have that much of an effect.

I can't wait to read more.