|Reviews for Cassandra's story|
| LilianClassic 11/25/10 . chapter 2
Ok, so I think this could be a good story, but it's sort of hard to read. I suggest you use paragraphs and correct punction, etc. so it's easier on the eyes and less confusing. I'm sure if you took the time and went back to edit and re-write some stuff (maybe adding in more details, etc.) then it would come out better. Hope I could help and keep going at it!