Good chapter and intro into the battle. LOVE this line"Wheeljack was a lot of things, but Optimus knew as well as anyone that, when push came to shove, the engineer was absolutely no fool." Must be a Jack thing.
Seriously, though, I do love when characters are multi-leveled and are often comic relief and perceived as fools, but underneath they're not at all but are, in fact, quite brilliant. And I love when other characters see through the outer layer and recognize this.

This is so exciting! I'm so happy you updated this story is great so far, and I know it can only get better! I love the peril and the excitement and everything! Woo! Can't wait for another update! :D

WOW Awsome chapter great job can't wait for an update real soon.

I'm always there to encouraged someone
Hope they find Bee and Wheeljack soon

Is Wheeljack stuttering? Or are those mistypes or something else?

please continue

I could feel the tension in the whole chapter. Pretty intense and good to see the Autobots so well co-ordinated. Let's hope it goes well for them and the covert ops going after Bumbelbee.(Also extra love for giving Huffer a line and mention)

I like it

Can't wait for an update

Great chapter well done can't wait for na update.

I like this chapter, where they start to pull everything together. Glad I could be helpful with the location research.)

Yeah! The Autobots know where Bumblebee is! Hopefully they're both at the Victory when the Autobots launch thier rescue mission. Please let them go back to the Ark safe and sound. Can't wait for the next update.

nice story! please update soon.

I love the Swoop POV, the repetitiveness of it, the way the distracted exposition works because it feels like that's the way this particular being thinks. It's really nice.

I think that Prime is going to have a few WORDS with Wheeljack over this little incident!

Great Chapter well done can't wait for more.